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written Monday, March 6 2006 10:36
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Hey guys, I wanted to share with you a script I made concerning Spidweb. I made it at school today, in an RE lesson. Please take the time to read it. ------------ Ed: Sorry Thralni, I never ment to hurt you. Thralni: No Ed, you've had too many chances, just leave me alone. Nikki: Don't mind me, but what Thralni says is true. Ed, I tryed to like you, but you constantly insult me. Then when I fight back you start whimpering and saying you hate me. Make some new friends Ed, cause I'm not one who wants to make up. *i: This topic dies, soon. Spidweb: We hate Ed, he can die for all we care. Kelandon: I have room to forgive you Ed, it just depends if your willing to take it... Ed: Thanks Kelandon, but forgivness isn't what I want anymore, I just want my friends back. The lurker:So well said Ed, perhaps you will be given back what you seek. Thralni: Ed, I want to like you. But I can't be your friend unless I pretend. I'm sorry Ed, I really am. Nikki: Maybe Ed can be given another chance... Spidweb: Supanik, your words are true. Perhaps Ed can really change, we just never gave him the chance. Ed:: Thanks Jeff, thanks to all of you. I know I was an idiot, and heck, I probably deserve to be banned. Thralni, could we make up? Kelandon: Ed, when you keep following someone its called stalking. What your doing to Thralni is pretty much the same. *i: This topic dies, just after I've had my cereal. Thralni: For your own good Ed, leave me alone. ------------ Well, this is what I thought I pretty much brought on myself. Thanks to Thralni, Nikki, Kelandon, The lurker, *i and spidweb for appearing! Perhaps we really can make up Thralni, I'd like it to be that way... [ Monday, March 06, 2006 10:50: Message edited by: Pokemon ] Posts: 275 | Registered: Sunday, January 8 2006 08:00 |
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Guardian
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written Monday, March 6 2006 10:46
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And here I was, hoping for a new BoA script... EDIT: Thanks for the title change, Ed. Stupid words with more than one meaning. [ Monday, March 06, 2006 10:50: Message edited by: Dintiradan ] Posts: 1509 | Registered: Tuesday, January 10 2006 08:00 |
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Law Bringer
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written Monday, March 6 2006 10:47
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Gah, I saw the title and thought I would see some interesting PHP code or something. :rolleyes: -------------------- Encyclopaedia Ermariana • Forum Archives • Forum Statistics • RSS [Topic / Forum] My Blog • Polaris • I eat novels for breakfast. Polaris is dead, long live Polaris. Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair. Posts: 8752 | Registered: Wednesday, May 14 2003 07:00 |
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Agent
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written Monday, March 6 2006 10:51
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quote:A BoA script would be in a wrong section... :P (I was hoping for a GF2 script... :) ) -------------------- Download Geneforge 4: Rebellion You have 6 posts. Nobody cares what you think. - Thuryl Wikipedia may be your friend, but UBB is not. - Dikiyoba Posts: 1310 | Registered: Tuesday, December 20 2005 08:00 |
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written Monday, March 6 2006 10:53
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Guys, please. Keep serious. I just want my friends back. Nikki, Thralni, please give me another chance. Posts: 275 | Registered: Sunday, January 8 2006 08:00 |
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Law Bringer
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written Monday, March 6 2006 10:56
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There is a critical element missing from this script. I leave it as an exercise for the reader to find it. —Alorael, who isn't counting stage directions. Spidweb isn't a stage, although sometimes this is less obvious than one might expect. Posts: 14579 | Registered: Saturday, December 1 2001 08:00 |
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Raven v. Writing Desk
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written Monday, March 6 2006 11:07
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In your script, Kelandon makes a grammatical error... that makes the whole thing inconceivable. :P Edit: make that two grammatical errors. [ Monday, March 06, 2006 11:25: Message edited by: Slartucker ] -------------------- Slarty vs. Desk • Desk vs. Slarty • Timeline of Ermarian • G4 Strategy Central Posts: 3560 | Registered: Wednesday, November 7 2001 08:00 |
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written Monday, March 6 2006 11:15
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quote:Hey, I wrote it while I was at school on a ripped out page of my maths book. What can you expect? EDIT: Please Thralni and Nikki, find it in your hearts. I want you both back, please... [ Monday, March 06, 2006 11:17: Message edited by: Pokemon ] Posts: 275 | Registered: Sunday, January 8 2006 08:00 |
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Law Bringer
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written Monday, March 6 2006 12:20
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I saw this thread and expected something like arghhhhhhhhh's new world with the improbable astrophysics and even more improbable ecology. Needless to say, I was relieved to find this instead. Ed, they will most likely forgive you in due time, time which will be accelerated if you cease to bother them about it. And problems with the script: -Jeff wouldn't touch that topic with a ten-foot pole. -TM would've wandered in at some point, as would most of us. -Alorael should've been included. -*i would've saved the cereal for later. I highly doubt that SupaNik and Thralni will come near this topic. -------------------- Gamble with Gaea, and she eats your dice. I hate undead. I really, really, really, really hate undead. With a passion. Posts: 4130 | Registered: Friday, March 26 2004 08:00 |
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written Monday, March 6 2006 13:11
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Well Ephesos, TM did appear in the origanal version, he told me I stood no chance for forgivness. Jeff was just added in for fun so I could talk to him, and at the time Alorael didn't come to mind. Also, *i was intended to be funny. [ Monday, March 06, 2006 13:12: Message edited by: Pokemon ] Posts: 275 | Registered: Sunday, January 8 2006 08:00 |
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Councilor
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written Monday, March 6 2006 14:51
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So, Ed, if you can write a story featuring Spiderweb, I can use you in a story featuring Spiderweb, right? I'll put up a link to it as soon as I finish the second scene. Don't worry, though, Alorael is in it. Sniping. Dikiyoba. Edit: Testing...testing...okay, it's up. [ Monday, March 06, 2006 16:22: Message edited by: Dikiyoba ] Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00 |
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Master
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written Monday, March 6 2006 18:49
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quote: -------------------- -ben4808 Posts: 3360 | Registered: Friday, June 25 2004 07:00 |
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written Monday, March 6 2006 19:06
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i have made 23 storys, 4 scripts, and 1 world, all were rejected :( :( :( -------------------- join me! we shall harness the power of geckos, bunnys, and fluffy pink stuffed animals and rule the world!!! Posts: 193 | Registered: Wednesday, December 14 2005 08:00 |
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Law Bringer
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written Monday, March 6 2006 20:32
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For a very good reason, arghhhhhhhhh. I thought we explained our objections very clearly, and they could've been used to better the state of your fictional world. Dikiyoba, that's a nice piece of work... -------------------- Gamble with Gaea, and she eats your dice. I hate undead. I really, really, really, really hate undead. With a passion. Posts: 4130 | Registered: Friday, March 26 2004 08:00 |
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written Monday, March 6 2006 22:51
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Dikiyoba, your script was okay, but making me a noob was rubbish. Anyway, if I make another script, I don't want you to end up having to be banned in it or something. Just don't call me a noob, okay? [ Monday, March 06, 2006 23:07: Message edited by: Pokemon ] Posts: 275 | Registered: Sunday, January 8 2006 08:00 |
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written Monday, March 6 2006 23:05
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Well done Dikiyoba, the ominous absence of stareye is a good touch. -------------------- quote: Posts: 4114 | Registered: Monday, April 25 2005 07:00 |
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Lifecrafter
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written Monday, March 6 2006 23:10
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quote: quote: Posts: 776 | Registered: Friday, July 4 2003 07:00 |
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written Monday, March 6 2006 23:13
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Kingy, your starting to egg me off. I'm trying to be a better person, but there you are just annoying the hell out of me. Seriously, why can't people here just leave me alone. As for Kingy, leave it, cause your really pushing me right now. [ Monday, March 06, 2006 23:14: Message edited by: Pokemon ] Posts: 275 | Registered: Sunday, January 8 2006 08:00 |
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Guardian
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written Monday, March 6 2006 23:39
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Ed, is your wellbeing and general behaviour really dependant on people tiptoeing around you? Do you see each and every friendly banter as a deep personal insult, warranting aggressive reaction? Grow a thicker skin, lad. People are quite willing to accept you, but find it difficult to handle drama queens. And no, I'm not pushing you. :) -------------------- Polaris Rache's A3 Site reformatted 2/3 done Rache's A3 Site, original version Posts: 1828 | Registered: Saturday, January 11 2003 08:00 |
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written Monday, March 6 2006 23:44
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quote:Well, I will. But only to say this: Ed, I will forgive you. As long as you stop doing the wounded puppy thing. And one more insult about my mother, and TM's gonna seem like a friendly kitten. Got it? So I guess I'm saying, it's last chance time. I would have used "last chance saloon", but I'm unsure as to how it is spelt. Now, can we stop using Spidweb for this kinda crap? Instant messaging is the way to go. -------------------- And when you want to Live How do you start? Where do you go? Who do you need to know? *Name by Slarty, so blame him if it's filthy... Posts: 2864 | Registered: Monday, September 8 2003 07:00 |
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La Canaliste
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written Tuesday, March 7 2006 04:13
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quote:*nods very seriously. Wise comments here. Also, friendship once injured takes a while to heal. You don't get it mended just like that. -------------------- I am a mater of time and how . Deep down, you know you should have voted for Alcritas! Posts: 387 | Registered: Tuesday, March 1 2005 08:00 |
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Off With Their Heads
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written Tuesday, March 7 2006 06:32
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quote:YES. -------------------- Arancaytar: Every time you ask people to compare TM and Kel, you endanger the poor, fluffy kittens. Smoo: Get ready to face the walls! Ephesos: In conclusion, yarr. Kelandon's Pink and Pretty Page!!: the authorized location for all things by me The Archive of all released BoE scenarios ever Posts: 7968 | Registered: Saturday, February 28 2004 08:00 |
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Shock Trooper
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written Tuesday, March 7 2006 07:52
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quote:Awesome. I hope there will be more scenes. :) Posts: 363 | Registered: Wednesday, February 22 2006 08:00 |
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written Tuesday, March 7 2006 08:03
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Please, Dikiyoba? can I ask you a favor? in act three, will you give me a role in which somebody tries to net let me hurt Eddie? You see, he tries to make me like him again, but then he posts this topic, in which he plays the "wounded puppy" and I'm the evil landlord type of person. Then he wants me to like me. Eddie: posting this topic in which you ask me to like you, is not the way to go. You know what I want you to do. if you forgot, read a PM. Any more tries to insult me, even when mild, will result in the loss of your head, and possibly some more limbs, if I get the chance. So dikiyoba: I hope you take my question in consideration. I would be honored. Eddie: grow up. EDIT: Eddie, can we talk on MSN? that will be probably the last talk, but I feel you didn't get the picture. You see, you managed to really hurt me (wow, how surprising), and you probably don't really know why. I'll tell you, but you could use some pain killers, a helmet and perhaps a thicker jumper while talking to me. Yes, that was a kind of threat. You may shout at me, but that will make thinsg worse. Just talk to me, and I hope you will remain standing afterwards. saunders: great. I couldn't have said it any better. Ed, listen to saunders. that is one thing you will have to learn. [ Tuesday, March 07, 2006 08:11: Message edited by: Ash... by Nathan Thralni ] -------------------- Play and rate my scenarios: Where the rivers meet View my upcoming scenario: The Nephil Search: Escape. Give us your drek! Posts: 3029 | Registered: Saturday, June 18 2005 07:00 |
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Shock Trooper
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written Tuesday, March 7 2006 08:57
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You know, you can get injured friendship mended 'just like that', if the people concerned are really (or have become) nice and willing to do that. I doubt that will be the case for Ed and Thralni, sadly. But one can always hope for a miracle. It happens sometimes. Posts: 363 | Registered: Wednesday, February 22 2006 08:00 |