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Councilor
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written Saturday, March 25 2006 19:52
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Act 9, Scene 2 is up. (And for such a short scene, it took an amazingly long time for me to write.) --------- Edit: Also, I put up two new pages. The appearances page lists all the members who appear. I recommend reading the all the scenes before you look at it. The reviews page lists selective comments made by members in throughout topic. The review page is rather a gray area because so many of the comments are taken out of context. Both will be updated whenever I deem it necessary. Like when a new scene comes out or when someone says something interesting. --------- OOC: Did Slartucker notice Dikiyoba's location? Does that answer yesterday's question? What does "OOC" stand for? Will Dikiyoba ever respond to a question with a direct answer? Have you ever seen a pink giraffe? --------- Edit 2: Page 18 already! [ Saturday, March 25, 2006 20:48: Message edited by: Dikiyoba ] Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00 |
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Shock Trooper
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written Saturday, March 25 2006 21:42
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Are you implying that I'm in horrible shape and couldn't outrun anyone for very long? ...You're right. Huh. Guess I didn't die at the hands of a random noob. I like being wrong. Posts: 353 | Registered: Monday, January 9 2006 08:00 |
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Law Bringer
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written Saturday, March 25 2006 23:02
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Wait... were A4's pylons ripped from Geneforge canon? In any case, that forum confused me. I somehow get the feeling that I'm going to die soon. Is that kind of paranoia normal? -------------------- Gamble with Gaea, and she eats your dice. I hate undead. I really, really, really, really hate undead. With a passion. Posts: 4130 | Registered: Friday, March 26 2004 08:00 |
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Shaper
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written Saturday, March 25 2006 23:59
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quote:Out of Charater. Good stuff, I like the addition of the appearences page. -------------------- I'll put a Spring in your step. :ph34r: Posts: 2396 | Registered: Saturday, January 29 2005 08:00 |
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Shaper
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written Sunday, March 26 2006 06:02
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Genius. I couldn't have hoped to die a better death! quote: quote:Posted because I'm egotistical, and, heck, I'm egotistical. Oh, and I love the review page! [ Sunday, March 26, 2006 06:10: Message edited by: Nikki xx ] -------------------- And when you want to Live How do you start? Where do you go? Who do you need to know? *Name by Slarty, so blame him if it's filthy... Posts: 2864 | Registered: Monday, September 8 2003 07:00 |
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Shaper
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written Sunday, March 26 2006 06:08
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Edit: Damn. Hit Quote instead of Edit. [ Sunday, March 26, 2006 06:09: Message edited by: Nikki xx ] -------------------- And when you want to Live How do you start? Where do you go? Who do you need to know? *Name by Slarty, so blame him if it's filthy... Posts: 2864 | Registered: Monday, September 8 2003 07:00 |
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Master
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written Sunday, March 26 2006 06:19
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Aran? Sexy? AAH >_<; Oh yea, it's nice as usual. I'm sure Spawner will be able to cause some confusion... and then when somebody dies they'll figure out that Spawner != Aran. :rolleyes: -------------------- Polaris - owns you. Undead Theories - double U slash E Posts: 3323 | Registered: Thursday, April 25 2002 07:00 |
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Lifecrafter
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written Sunday, March 26 2006 06:54
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I have got to get a better line in the reviews section. -------------------- ??? ?????? ???? ????? Posts: 883 | Registered: Wednesday, October 19 2005 07:00 |
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Shock Trooper
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written Sunday, March 26 2006 08:10
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Geez... I wonder how many characters are going to be alive at the end of this script. Maybe none. :P By the way, I love the part where Aran falls through the mirror. (And wow, I'm dead. Now all I have to do is learn how to draw a comic strip so I can have my revenge... :cool: ) Posts: 363 | Registered: Wednesday, February 22 2006 08:00 |
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Councilor
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written Sunday, March 26 2006 12:52
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Act 9, Scenes 3 and 4 are up. Apologies for the short length of both. My post will be long to compensate. ----- Originally by Internal666hate: quote:Anyone want to guess what the new line in the review section for Infernal666hate is? ----- Originally by the Lurker: quote:Go right ahead. I would be most pleased. Archmage Alex hasn't followed through on his promised updating and Slartucker's taking a break, so there is a comic shortage. ----- Originally by Wise Man: quote:It's all Nikki's fault, not mine. ----- Originally by Ephesos: quote:Probably. Pylons haven't appeared in any previous Avernum game and they are common in the Geneforge games. I haven't run across any A4 pylons yet, though. My party's still debating whether to go to Fort Draco or not. ----- Originally by Ephesos: quote:You've had this paranoia since the top of page 11 in this topic and you haven't died yet. ----- Dikiyoba. ----- Edit: Typo. [ Sunday, March 26, 2006 13:02: Message edited by: Dikiyoba ] Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00 |
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Master
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written Sunday, March 26 2006 16:32
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Holy crap, now the admins are dead. Why does this seem suddenly similar to stuff that Yoshiyuki Tomino writes? O_o; -------------------- Polaris - owns you. Undead Theories - double U slash E Posts: 3323 | Registered: Thursday, April 25 2002 07:00 |
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Law Bringer
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written Sunday, March 26 2006 16:55
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quote:You must not have explored Fort Monastary very well then. There is a pylon in the northwest corner. :P quote:I was thinking George R.R. Martin, myself, but it amounts to the same thing. [ Sunday, March 26, 2006 17:09: Message edited by: Tyranicus ] -------------------- "You're drinking liquor because you're thirsty? How nasty is your freaking water?" —Lazarus Spiderweb Chat Room Avernum RP • Summaries • OoC • Roster Shadow Vale - My site, home of the Spiderweb Chat Database, BoA Scenario Database, & the A1 Quest List, among other things. Posts: 1556 | Registered: Sunday, November 20 2005 08:00 |
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Law Bringer
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written Sunday, March 26 2006 19:08
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quote:Not to mention Hrickis, Kravvit-Bok, and everywhere west of Fort Remote. In fact, surrounding far too many of the high-level villains in the game. -------------------- Gamble with Gaea, and she eats your dice. I hate undead. I really, really, really, really hate undead. With a passion. Posts: 4130 | Registered: Friday, March 26 2004 08:00 |
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Nuke and Pave
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written Sunday, March 26 2006 19:31
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quote:It reminds me of Martin too. Especially the episodes when admins are killed just as they figure out how to win the war, because Aran dropped his key when he fought Spawner, while the newbies fooled by Spawner rebell, killing their commander. Considering that there are only a couple forums left and at least 28 members left to kill, I suspect next few scenes will feature a couple huge explosions, followed by paragraph-long lists of names. -------------------- Be careful with a word, as you would with a sword, For it too has the power to kill. However well placed word, unlike a well placed sword, Can also have the power to heal. Posts: 2649 | Registered: Wednesday, October 3 2001 07:00 |
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Councilor
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written Sunday, March 26 2006 19:35
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Originally by Tyranicus: quote:I meant the ones that attack you. My party has explored Fort Monastary, at least. ----- Originally written by Wise Man: quote:Perhaps, but I've been killing characters off since the very beginning. I'm not waiting until the end. ----- Dikiyoba has completed Act 9, Scene 5. There's not too much more to add to the script. Hang in there for just a little while longer. ----- Edit: Added a paragraph. [ Sunday, March 26, 2006 19:41: Message edited by: Dikiyoba ] Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00 |
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Infiltrator
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written Sunday, March 26 2006 20:10
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Not meaning to be picky, but Act 9 scene 4 begins with a unneeded '8'. So far act 9 is showing a good deal more complexity in some ways than previous ones. On the whole it looks very good. I hope to see an increase in the number of fluffy turtles as the focus of attention moves closer to the general forum. Edit: Removed a typo of my own. [ Monday, March 27, 2006 04:44: Message edited by: Niemand ] -------------------- Überraschung des Dosenöffners! "On guard, you musty sofa!" Posts: 627 | Registered: Monday, March 7 2005 08:00 |
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Councilor
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written Sunday, March 26 2006 20:18
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Originally by Niemand: quote:Dikiyoba can't even comprehend how or why that 8 got there and lived for so long. It's gone now, though. Edit: Typos deserve no mercy. [ Sunday, March 26, 2006 20:20: Message edited by: Dikiyoba ] Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00 |
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Shock Trooper
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written Sunday, March 26 2006 20:50
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quote: quote:Kill it! I wonder why the typos in Kelandon's lines are the ones that stand out most? Posts: 353 | Registered: Monday, January 9 2006 08:00 |
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Shock Trooper
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written Sunday, March 26 2006 21:39
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I figured that they were because of the time he hit his head on that rock, so they showed that it was really a serious injury. I'm probably wrong, though. Oh, and I guess I died already. Ah well, it was a good life. -------------------- Do not meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy, and taste good with ketchup. Posts: 256 | Registered: Monday, October 8 2001 07:00 |
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Shaper
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written Sunday, March 26 2006 22:12
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quote:There is no typo. Kelandon meant to say "Get out of their exlamation mark," but Diki was lazy and only done a "!". :P EDIT: Wtf? I thought Drakey was gone? (Regarding the story) [ Sunday, March 26, 2006 22:13: Message edited by: Spring ] -------------------- I'll put a Spring in your step. :ph34r: Posts: 2396 | Registered: Saturday, January 29 2005 08:00 |
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Infiltrator
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written Monday, March 27 2006 00:52
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Dikiyoba edited the script and had him revived. Probably because there's a cooler way for him to die later. -------------------- But I don't want to ride the elevator. Posts: 420 | Registered: Sunday, January 8 2006 08:00 |
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Raven v. Writing Desk
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written Monday, March 27 2006 02:59
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I agree, act 9 has been very good stuff. Especially that line of Saunders which, once again, was beautiful. -------------------- Slarty vs. Desk • Desk vs. Slarty • Timeline of Ermarian • G4 Strategy Central Posts: 3560 | Registered: Wednesday, November 7 2001 08:00 |
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Law Bringer
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written Monday, March 27 2006 11:06
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Finally, the A4 forum... I can do some damage there. RETRIBUTION!!! EDIT: As I've said before, I love my role in this... and I personally can't wait to bust out the Balms of Life at the end of the war. I mean, if the noobs can revive their troops and/or turn them into zombies, why can't we cast Return Life?! Come to think of it, once we hit the A4 forum, I wouldn't even need Balms of Life anymore. My SP would increase tenfold, and I could just cast Return Life until everyone was back... [ Monday, March 27, 2006 13:47: Message edited by: Ephesos ] -------------------- Gamble with Gaea, and she eats your dice. I hate undead. I really, really, really, really hate undead. With a passion. Posts: 4130 | Registered: Friday, March 26 2004 08:00 |
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Electric Sheep One
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written Monday, March 27 2006 13:11
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It's really too bad I don't live to see how it ends. -------------------- We're not doing cool. We're doing pretty. Posts: 3335 | Registered: Thursday, September 4 2003 07:00 |
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Councilor
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written Monday, March 27 2006 15:59
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Act 10, Scene 1 is up. It's much longer than the last scene. But here's another long post anyway. ----- Edit: I'm going to be pretty busy tomorrow, so don't expect the next scene tomorrow. (I'll still be on the boards, of course.) Even if I do get a scene out, it's likely to be very short. ----- On the small chance that some of you missed it: quote:----- Originally by Student of Trinity: quote:Just because you're dead doesn't mean you have to stop reading, you know. ----- Does anyone know when GoldenKing gets back? He's missing the best part. ----- Originally by Ephesos: quote:Why does Dikiyoba have the sudden, overwhelming urge to laugh madly? [ Monday, March 27, 2006 16:16: Message edited by: Dikiyoba ] Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00 |