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Law Bringer
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I somehow sense my imminent death... some kind of quickly-slapped-together plot to make me kamikaze into a horde of undead n00bs.

Thanks, Dikiyoba. :(

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Gamble with Gaea, and she eats your dice.

I hate undead. I really, really, really, really hate undead. With a passion.
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Raven v. Writing Desk
Member # 261
Profile Homepage #251
I am both disappointed and relieved that Alec did not get assimilated into the noob collective as I was somehow expecting.

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Warrior
Member # 6629
Profile Homepage #252
quote:
Its head is reptilian, except for large, round eyes.
FYT

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"When everything is coming your way, you're in the wrong lane."
Posts: 120 | Registered: Sunday, January 1 2006 08:00
Councilor
Member # 6600
Profile Homepage #253
I'll fix it later, when the next scene goes up. Editing for one small typo is rather a pain.

Dikiyoba.

Edit: Ephesos, the undead are not a half-baked plot idea quickly thrown together to cause someone's death. They are the result of a carefully planned plot idea created to cause multiple deaths.

[ Thursday, March 16, 2006 16:35: Message edited by: Dikiyoba ]
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? Man, ? Amazing
Member # 5755
Profile #254
I must applaud you for only allowing eleven minutes to elapse before making the necessary corrections.

It is all good.

Edit - Yes, it has been edited.

[ Thursday, March 16, 2006 18:44: Message edited by: Jumpin' Salmon ]

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quote:
Originally written by Kelandon:

Well, I'm at least pretty sure that Salmon is losing.


Posts: 4114 | Registered: Monday, April 25 2005 07:00
Shaper
Member # 5450
Profile Homepage #255
quote:
Originally written by Jumpin' Salmon:

I must insist that you repair the post announcing the latest addition. That was most certainly not Act 5.
It says "Act 4" for me. Unless Diki changed it?

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I'll put a Spring in your step.
:ph34r:
Posts: 2396 | Registered: Saturday, January 29 2005 08:00
Councilor
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Profile Homepage #256
I made the typo in my earlier post, not in the script itself. There should be no Act 5, Scene 5. It doesn't exist. Act 5 only goes up to Scene 1. But it is now done.

Dikiyoba.
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Law Bringer
Member # 4153
Profile Homepage #257
quote:
Troll Master runs around crazily as Terror's Martyr continues to talk. After hearing the words "postmodernism" and "McGuffin" both used for no reason at all in the same sentence, Troll Master suddenly spontaneously combusts.
I love this...

So the Avernum Trilogy's next? Cue the Xian skull...

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Gamble with Gaea, and she eats your dice.

I hate undead. I really, really, really, really hate undead. With a passion.
Posts: 4130 | Registered: Friday, March 26 2004 08:00
Councilor
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Profile Homepage #258
No, the Exile Trilogy Forum first and then the Avernum Trilogy Forum.

Of course, the Avernum Trilogy Forum will basically be a repeat of the Exile Trilogy, except with more content and a different perspective. The graphics would be updated too, except that there are no graphics. I'll just have to use different words, instead.

Originally by Jumpin' Salmon:

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I must applaud you for only allowing eleven minutes to elapse before making the necessary corrections.
As if further evidence was needed for proving that Dikiyoba has no life...

Edit: Added quote and sig change.

[ Thursday, March 16, 2006 21:23: Message edited by: Dikiyoba ]
Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00
? Man, ? Amazing
Member # 5755
Profile #259
quote:
Originally written by Ephesos:

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Troll Master runs around crazily as Terror's Martyr continues to talk. After hearing the words "postmodernism" and "McGuffin" both used for no reason at all in the same sentence, Troll Master suddenly spontaneously combusts.
I love this...

IMAGE(http://stuff.ermarian.net/salmon/yeahthat.gif)
IMAGE(http://stuff.ermarian.net/salmon/rofl.gif)

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quote:
Originally written by Kelandon:

Well, I'm at least pretty sure that Salmon is losing.


Posts: 4114 | Registered: Monday, April 25 2005 07:00
Shaper
Member # 5450
Profile Homepage #260
Oh dear. Oh dear, dear, dear.

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I'll put a Spring in your step.
:ph34r:
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Law Bringer
Member # 2984
Profile Homepage #261
quote:
Originally written by Ephesos:

quote:
Troll Master runs around crazily as Terror's Martyr continues to talk. After hearing the words "postmodernism" and "McGuffin" both used for no reason at all in the same sentence, Troll Master suddenly spontaneously combusts.
I love this...

So the Avernum Trilogy's next? Cue the Xian skull...

These should SO have included "sociopolitical objectivism".

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Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair.
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Raven v. Writing Desk
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Yes, and we all know you can't have postmodernism without agathism. :P

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Guardian
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Dikiyoba, I'll have you know that I took Draughts of Doom 101 in my first year of Evil Overlord School. Of course, my display of inepitude could be a mask for me to hide how much I am of a threat. Or is it? Why did I just tell you that? To make you think I'm not much a threat because I tell you how much of a threat I am? Or is it? Mu-ha-ha-ha!!!

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IF I EVER BECOME AN EVIL OVERLORD:
If my trusted lieutenant tells me my Legions of Terror are losing a battle, I will believe him. After all, he's my trusted lieutenant.

[ Friday, March 17, 2006 10:15: Message edited by: Dintiradan ]
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Dikiyoba sees that Dintiradan found the latest update to the script.

Act 6, Scenes 1, 2, and 3 are up. No, Jumpin' Salmon, that is not a typo.
Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00
Guardian
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Profile Homepage #265
What do you mean it's not a typo? What kind of play has six acts?

(Calms down and remembers that the world doesn't revolve around Shakespeare).

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IF I EVER BECOME AN EVIL OVERLORD:
I will not imprison members of the same party in the same cell block, let alone the same cell. If they are important prisoners, I will keep the only key to the cell door on my person instead of handing out copies to every bottom-rung guard in the prison.
Posts: 1509 | Registered: Tuesday, January 10 2006 08:00
? Man, ? Amazing
Member # 5755
Profile #266
quote:
Originally written by Dikiyoba:

Act 6, Scenes 1, 2, and 3 are up. No, Jumpin' Salmon, that is not a typo.
quote:
Ephesos casts a healing potion on a newb's slashed arm
Oh, don't worry about me recognizing typo's...

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quote:
Originally written by Kelandon:

Well, I'm at least pretty sure that Salmon is losing.


Posts: 4114 | Registered: Monday, April 25 2005 07:00
Nuke and Pave
Member # 24
Profile Homepage #267
quote:
Originally written by Jumpin' Salmon:

quote:
Originally written by Dikiyoba:

Act 6, Scenes 1, 2, and 3 are up. No, Jumpin' Salmon, that is not a typo.
quote:
Ephesos casts a healing potion on a newb's slashed arm
Oh, don't worry about me recognizing typo's...

recognizing typo's? :P

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Be careful with a word, as you would with a sword,
For it too has the power to kill.
However well placed word, unlike a well placed sword,
Can also have the power to heal.
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Raven v. Writing Desk
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I actually like the "casts a healing potion." We all know that potions were meant to be thrown violently at their intended recipient, not quaffed. The shards of glass are part of the healing effect :P

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Councilor
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Gah! Not another one! There have been so many typos that it looks like a parody of a parody.

Edit: All better. At least until the next one is found.

Dikiyoba's most amusing typo is still typing erase_text_barriers(); instead of erase_text_bubbles(); while trying to create a cutscene for a BoA scenario. If only.

[ Friday, March 17, 2006 11:29: Message edited by: Dikiyoba ]
Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00
Nuke and Pave
Member # 24
Profile Homepage #270
quote:
Originally written by Dikiyoba:

Gah! Not another one! There have been so many typos that it looks like a parody of a parody.
...

Don't worry about it. Your story is good and that's the only thing that matters. I've seen some official websites and blogs with more typos than this.

[ Friday, March 17, 2006 11:57: Message edited by: Zeviz ]

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Be careful with a word, as you would with a sword,
For it too has the power to kill.
However well placed word, unlike a well placed sword,
Can also have the power to heal.
Posts: 2649 | Registered: Wednesday, October 3 2001 07:00
? Man, ? Amazing
Member # 5755
Profile #271
quote:
Originally written by Zeviz:

quote:
Originally written by Dikiyoba:

Gah! Not another one! There have been so many typos that it looks like a parody of a parody.
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Don't worry about it. Your story is good and that's the only thing that matters. I've seen some official websites and blogs with more typos than this.

Yeah, I'm only jealous. I lack the creativity of a snake.

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quote:
Originally written by Kelandon:

Well, I'm at least pretty sure that Salmon is losing.


Posts: 4114 | Registered: Monday, April 25 2005 07:00
Councilor
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Act 6, Scene 4! It's long.

Dikiyoba has nothing else to say here. At least, not yet.
Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00
Shaper
Member # 5450
Profile Homepage #273
Why does the ur-Noob always speak in capital letters?

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I'll put a Spring in your step.
:ph34r:
Posts: 2396 | Registered: Saturday, January 29 2005 08:00
Infiltrator
Member # 6652
Profile #274
I thought it was because he shouts.

I GOT SOME LINES! HALLELUJAH!

Of course... I only have one line, and I'm someone who futilely punches someone and is removed without dying so you don't have write a death monologue...

BUT I GOT SOME LINES!!!

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But I don't want to ride the elevator.
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