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Law Bringer
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written Thursday, March 16 2006 15:18
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I somehow sense my imminent death... some kind of quickly-slapped-together plot to make me kamikaze into a horde of undead n00bs. Thanks, Dikiyoba. :( -------------------- Gamble with Gaea, and she eats your dice. I hate undead. I really, really, really, really hate undead. With a passion. Posts: 4130 | Registered: Friday, March 26 2004 08:00 |
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Raven v. Writing Desk
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written Thursday, March 16 2006 15:32
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I am both disappointed and relieved that Alec did not get assimilated into the noob collective as I was somehow expecting. -------------------- Slarty vs. Desk • Desk vs. Slarty • Timeline of Ermarian • G4 Strategy Central Posts: 3560 | Registered: Wednesday, November 7 2001 08:00 |
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Warrior
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written Thursday, March 16 2006 16:25
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quote:FYT -------------------- "When everything is coming your way, you're in the wrong lane." Posts: 120 | Registered: Sunday, January 1 2006 08:00 |
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Councilor
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written Thursday, March 16 2006 16:30
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I'll fix it later, when the next scene goes up. Editing for one small typo is rather a pain. Dikiyoba. Edit: Ephesos, the undead are not a half-baked plot idea quickly thrown together to cause someone's death. They are the result of a carefully planned plot idea created to cause multiple deaths. [ Thursday, March 16, 2006 16:35: Message edited by: Dikiyoba ] Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00 |
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? Man, ? Amazing
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written Thursday, March 16 2006 17:10
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I must applaud you for only allowing eleven minutes to elapse before making the necessary corrections. It is all good. Edit - Yes, it has been edited. [ Thursday, March 16, 2006 18:44: Message edited by: Jumpin' Salmon ] -------------------- quote: Posts: 4114 | Registered: Monday, April 25 2005 07:00 |
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Shaper
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written Thursday, March 16 2006 18:35
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quote:It says "Act 4" for me. Unless Diki changed it? -------------------- I'll put a Spring in your step. :ph34r: Posts: 2396 | Registered: Saturday, January 29 2005 08:00 |
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Councilor
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written Thursday, March 16 2006 20:43
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I made the typo in my earlier post, not in the script itself. There should be no Act 5, Scene 5. It doesn't exist. Act 5 only goes up to Scene 1. But it is now done. Dikiyoba. Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00 |
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Law Bringer
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written Thursday, March 16 2006 20:57
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quote:I love this... So the Avernum Trilogy's next? Cue the Xian skull... -------------------- Gamble with Gaea, and she eats your dice. I hate undead. I really, really, really, really hate undead. With a passion. Posts: 4130 | Registered: Friday, March 26 2004 08:00 |
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Councilor
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written Thursday, March 16 2006 21:20
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No, the Exile Trilogy Forum first and then the Avernum Trilogy Forum. Of course, the Avernum Trilogy Forum will basically be a repeat of the Exile Trilogy, except with more content and a different perspective. The graphics would be updated too, except that there are no graphics. I'll just have to use different words, instead. Originally by Jumpin' Salmon: quote:As if further evidence was needed for proving that Dikiyoba has no life... Edit: Added quote and sig change. [ Thursday, March 16, 2006 21:23: Message edited by: Dikiyoba ] Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00 |
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? Man, ? Amazing
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written Thursday, March 16 2006 21:31
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quote:   -------------------- quote: Posts: 4114 | Registered: Monday, April 25 2005 07:00 |
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Shaper
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written Thursday, March 16 2006 21:34
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Oh dear. Oh dear, dear, dear. -------------------- I'll put a Spring in your step. :ph34r: Posts: 2396 | Registered: Saturday, January 29 2005 08:00 |
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Law Bringer
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written Thursday, March 16 2006 21:54
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quote:These should SO have included "sociopolitical objectivism". -------------------- Encyclopaedia Ermariana • Forum Archives • Forum Statistics • RSS [Topic / Forum] My Blog • Polaris • I eat novels for breakfast. Polaris is dead, long live Polaris. Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair. Posts: 8752 | Registered: Wednesday, May 14 2003 07:00 |
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Raven v. Writing Desk
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written Friday, March 17 2006 04:08
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Yes, and we all know you can't have postmodernism without agathism. :P -------------------- Slarty vs. Desk • Desk vs. Slarty • Timeline of Ermarian • G4 Strategy Central Posts: 3560 | Registered: Wednesday, November 7 2001 08:00 |
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Guardian
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written Friday, March 17 2006 10:13
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Dikiyoba, I'll have you know that I took Draughts of Doom 101 in my first year of Evil Overlord School. Of course, my display of inepitude could be a mask for me to hide how much I am of a threat. Or is it? Why did I just tell you that? To make you think I'm not much a threat because I tell you how much of a threat I am? Or is it? Mu-ha-ha-ha!!! -------------------- IF I EVER BECOME AN EVIL OVERLORD: If my trusted lieutenant tells me my Legions of Terror are losing a battle, I will believe him. After all, he's my trusted lieutenant. [ Friday, March 17, 2006 10:15: Message edited by: Dintiradan ] Posts: 1509 | Registered: Tuesday, January 10 2006 08:00 |
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Councilor
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written Friday, March 17 2006 10:16
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Dikiyoba sees that Dintiradan found the latest update to the script. Act 6, Scenes 1, 2, and 3 are up. No, Jumpin' Salmon, that is not a typo. Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00 |
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Guardian
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written Friday, March 17 2006 10:24
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What do you mean it's not a typo? What kind of play has six acts? (Calms down and remembers that the world doesn't revolve around Shakespeare). -------------------- IF I EVER BECOME AN EVIL OVERLORD: I will not imprison members of the same party in the same cell block, let alone the same cell. If they are important prisoners, I will keep the only key to the cell door on my person instead of handing out copies to every bottom-rung guard in the prison. Posts: 1509 | Registered: Tuesday, January 10 2006 08:00 |
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? Man, ? Amazing
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written Friday, March 17 2006 11:08
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quote: quote:Oh, don't worry about me recognizing typo's... -------------------- quote: Posts: 4114 | Registered: Monday, April 25 2005 07:00 |
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Nuke and Pave
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written Friday, March 17 2006 11:17
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quote:recognizing typo's? :P -------------------- Be careful with a word, as you would with a sword, For it too has the power to kill. However well placed word, unlike a well placed sword, Can also have the power to heal. Posts: 2649 | Registered: Wednesday, October 3 2001 07:00 |
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Raven v. Writing Desk
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written Friday, March 17 2006 11:21
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I actually like the "casts a healing potion." We all know that potions were meant to be thrown violently at their intended recipient, not quaffed. The shards of glass are part of the healing effect :P -------------------- Slarty vs. Desk • Desk vs. Slarty • Timeline of Ermarian • G4 Strategy Central Posts: 3560 | Registered: Wednesday, November 7 2001 08:00 |
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Councilor
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written Friday, March 17 2006 11:24
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Gah! Not another one! There have been so many typos that it looks like a parody of a parody. Edit: All better. At least until the next one is found. Dikiyoba's most amusing typo is still typing erase_text_barriers(); instead of erase_text_bubbles(); while trying to create a cutscene for a BoA scenario. If only. [ Friday, March 17, 2006 11:29: Message edited by: Dikiyoba ] Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00 |
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Nuke and Pave
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written Friday, March 17 2006 11:57
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quote:Don't worry about it. Your story is good and that's the only thing that matters. I've seen some official websites and blogs with more typos than this. [ Friday, March 17, 2006 11:57: Message edited by: Zeviz ] -------------------- Be careful with a word, as you would with a sword, For it too has the power to kill. However well placed word, unlike a well placed sword, Can also have the power to heal. Posts: 2649 | Registered: Wednesday, October 3 2001 07:00 |
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? Man, ? Amazing
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written Friday, March 17 2006 12:20
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quote:Yeah, I'm only jealous. I lack the creativity of a snake. -------------------- quote: Posts: 4114 | Registered: Monday, April 25 2005 07:00 |
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Councilor
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written Friday, March 17 2006 16:23
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Act 6, Scene 4! It's long. Dikiyoba has nothing else to say here. At least, not yet. Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00 |
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Shaper
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written Friday, March 17 2006 16:35
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Why does the ur-Noob always speak in capital letters? -------------------- I'll put a Spring in your step. :ph34r: Posts: 2396 | Registered: Saturday, January 29 2005 08:00 |
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Infiltrator
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written Friday, March 17 2006 16:41
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I thought it was because he shouts. I GOT SOME LINES! HALLELUJAH! Of course... I only have one line, and I'm someone who futilely punches someone and is removed without dying so you don't have write a death monologue... BUT I GOT SOME LINES!!! -------------------- But I don't want to ride the elevator. Posts: 420 | Registered: Sunday, January 8 2006 08:00 |