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Too Sexy for my Title
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I am hurted that you killed me. I mean, I just asked if there was a point to my character, I didn't request for it to be killed. Poor script Marlenny. And not even a proper goodbye, no one even noticed. It's so sad, and then Kel almost dying. I just can't type anymore
*sobs
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Raven v. Writing Desk
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That's a good scene. It has the right balance of plot and camp. I especially enjoyed Vlish's attack.

Edit: No one even noticed? Why do you think Kel got violent all of a sudden?

[ Wednesday, March 22, 2006 19:21: Message edited by: Slartucker ]

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Guardian
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quote:
Kelandon: Well, your wrong.

Slartucker: What did you say?

Kelandon: I said your wrong.
It's the end of the world as we know it...

I like the way you've been leading up to the A4 forums. :)

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Zephyr Tempest: We have to rejoin the others. Do you have an idea, Spy-there?

Spy-there: I like the idea of jumping down and fighting our way through.

Zephyr Tempest: We've tried that two times already.

Spy-there: Third time's the charm.

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Too Sexy for my Title
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Profile #378
quote:
Originally written by Slartucker:

Edit: No one even noticed? Why do you think Kel got violent all of a sudden?
Because he got hit by a rock and apparently almost died?? :P
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Shock Trooper
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I got a cameo! And I haven't even posted in this thread! Huzzah! ...Now to sit back, and wait for my death at the hands of some random noob.

And since I started posting...
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Act 7, Scene 6 said:
Kelandon: Oh my god! They killed Smoo!
Doesn't this line alone mean that Smoo will be seen fighting along the rest of the spidwebbers in a later scene, with noone paying special attention to the fact that he should be dead?
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Guardian
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Huzzah! A new scene! I still can't wait to read more. You're a good writer Dikiyoba.

Oh, for future reference, I prefer to use magic. Particularly Ice Magic. Along with Feline-Based Doom.

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Shaper
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quote:
Originally written by Dominican Desire:

hurted
Heh.

Good stuff, Diki.

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I'll put a Spring in your step.
:ph34r:
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Shaper
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I'm amazed by the lack of Brody in that scene. Ok, ok, I just wanted to use the name Brody, but still.

Marl: Kel went crazy 'cus you'd kicked the bucket. And got hit after that.

And Dikiyoba: :)

That's all I have to say.

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How do you start?
Where do you go?
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Shock Trooper
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As the Spiderwebbers on the western hill struggle to move another boulder, a bolt comes flying up and strikes Dallerdin.
Somehow, I'm not surprised that it ended like that. In retrospect, posting "I'm still not dead yet" was like asking for a custom title.

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Agent
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Profile #384
Woah, I got a sudden appearance and I am not dead yet. Thank you, Dikiyoba.

But Marlenny ;_; and Schro ;_; and Dallerdin ;_;
Can't we find a mighty priest who knows the spell Return Life? Perhaps ef?

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Dikiyoba: Are you unconscious yet?
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Law Bringer
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Originally written by I want back my name:

Can't we find a mighty priest who knows the spell Return Life? Perhaps ef?
Technically, I think my character should be able to do this, but it simply too busy keeping everyone else from dying.

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Gamble with Gaea, and she eats your dice.

I hate undead. I really, really, really, really hate undead. With a passion.
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Shock Trooper
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quote:
Originally written by Spring:

quote:
Originally written by Dominican Desire:

hurted
Heh.

Well, Marlenny is French, isn't she? If so, that kind of explains everything. :P
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Too Sexy for my Title
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Profile #387
quote:
Originally written by The Lurker:

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Originally written by Spring:

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Originally written by Dominican Desire:

hurted
Heh.

Well, Marlenny is French, isn't she? If so, that kind of explains everything. :P

You two just couldn't let it go. Seriously, correcting my typos is a full time job with no pay. I thought you all had given up

Edit: French? Me?

[ Thursday, March 23, 2006 09:04: Message edited by: Dominican Desire ]
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La Canaliste
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I love "hurted".

Reminds me of one of my sons, when small, saying with great feeling "You have hurted my feeeelings!"

*nostalgic motherly sigh as she considers 6ft hunks*

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Deep down, you know you should have voted for Alcritas!
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Agent
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quote:
Originally written by saunders:

...

Reminds me of one of my sons, when small, saying with great feeling "You have hurted my feeeelings!"
...

:) It sounds like the first line of a pop song to me. Has your son become a famous singer meanwhile, Saunders?
I am too curious, I know.

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Dikiyoba: Are you unconscious yet?
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Raven v. Writing Desk
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quote:
Originally written by Ephesos:

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Originally written by I want back my name:

Can't we find a mighty priest who knows the spell Return Life? Perhaps ef?
Technically, I think my character should be able to do this, but it simply too busy keeping everyone else from dying.

Maybe you're just out of Resurrection Balm and you don't have any Ember Flowers. More to the point... "keeping everyone else from dying?" To quote myself,

"A little! It's more than that! Here we are, getting killed in a senseless war! There used to be hundreds of newbs and now there are less than a dozen."

I think the real question is why Ephesos doesn't have access to mass healing spells. We could have holed up in the Exile Trilogy Forum, and just had Ephesos cast Light Heal All every turn, with Diki dumping an energy potion down his throat when needed, and held out almost indefinitely.

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Law Bringer
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quote:
Originally written by Slartucker:

I think the real question is why Ephesos doesn't have access to mass healing spells. We could have holed up in the Exile Trilogy Forum, and just had Ephesos cast Light Heal All every turn, with Diki dumping an energy potion down his throat when needed, and held out almost indefinitely.
Wait till we get to the Avernum 4 forum... my SP will quadruple (at least), and then there's Divine Restoration. 'Nuff said.

... and of course, my favorite spell. RETRIBUTION!!!

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Gamble with Gaea, and she eats your dice.

I hate undead. I really, really, really, really hate undead. With a passion.
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E Equals MC What!!!!
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quote:
Originally written by Slartucker:

"There used to be hundreds of newbs and now there are less than a dozen."
...this is a good thing, surely? :confused:

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SupaNik: Aran, you're not big enough to threaten Ash. Dammit, even JV had to think twice.
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Agent
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You know you could need support, Ephesos. To revive some qualified snipers and mages would be a great deed. Um ... and Marlenny to cast Charming all over the noobs :P

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Lifecrafter
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I'm still waiting for a part larger than swinging Demonslayer (especially when we get driven into the A4 forum, I'd much rather have a stick.)

I don't care if I die, so long as I get some lines.

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Shaper
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quote:
Originally written by Dominican Desire:

You two just couldn't let it go. Seriously, correcting my typos is a full time job with no pay. I thought you all had given up.
I am hurted that you think that, Marlenny.

I only mentioned it because it sounded funny in the context. :P

EDIT: Fixed quote.

[ Thursday, March 23, 2006 14:14: Message edited by: Spring ]

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I'll put a Spring in your step.
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Off With Their Heads
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quote:
Originally written by The Lurker:

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Originally written by Spring:

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Originally written by Dominican Desire:

hurted
Heh.

Well, Marlenny is French, isn't she? If so, that kind of explains everything. :P

This kind of reminds me of the way that the kids on South Park call Pip "Frenchie." :P

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Arancaytar: Every time you ask people to compare TM and Kel, you endanger the poor, fluffy kittens.
Smoo: Get ready to face the walls!
Ephesos: In conclusion, yarr.

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Infiltrator
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quote:
Originally written by Ash Lael:

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Originally written by Slartucker:

"There used to be hundreds of newbs and now there are less than a dozen."
...this is a good thing, surely? :confused:

As I understand it, "newbs" and "n00bs" are different. "Newbs" refers to new or inexperienced people. It is not derogatory. "N00b" refers to someone who is actively trying to be annoying.

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But I don't want to ride the elevator.
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Originally by Dominican Desire:

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And not even a proper goodbye, no one even noticed.
Since everyone should die happy, I've edited the script so that Kelandon notices now.

Which brings me way back to the end of Act 4, Scene 4. Alorael complained that his character dies without a proper monologue. He now has a brillant dying line. Well, he now has something at least. And no, I didn't know what day today was when I wrote it.

Finally, Act 8, Scenes 2 and 3 are out.

Dikiyoba.
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Raven v. Writing Desk
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That is apparently the classification that is used here, or at least in Dikiyoba's script. So that was what I meant with the quote. I don't really like using the terminology that way myself. Newbie is and has always been a mostly derogatory term.

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