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Councilor
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written Saturday, April 1 2006 11:13
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Sorry that there wasn't a scene yesterday. I was hit by an attack of real life. But I finally have Act 11, Scene 1 done and up. And I've already started work on the final scene. It's going to be very long. Dikiyoba saw an add for turtles on Dikiyoba's website today. No, they weren't fluffy. One of them was claiming that it didn't have eyes, though. Edit: Top of page twenty! And post number 895! These are good numbers for tracking myself. [ Saturday, April 01, 2006 11:20: Message edited by: Dikiyoba ] Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00 |
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Infiltrator
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written Saturday, April 1 2006 12:04
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Does anyone else have the nagging suspicion that the Ur-Noob will die of a cold just when all seems lost? -------------------- But I don't want to ride the elevator. Posts: 420 | Registered: Sunday, January 8 2006 08:00 |
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Infiltrator
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written Saturday, April 1 2006 12:11
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How could a beast of fire die of cold? Posts: 587 | Registered: Tuesday, April 1 2003 08:00 |
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Law Bringer
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written Saturday, April 1 2006 12:26
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If it kills Martians... —Alorael, who can't understand how noobs can persist so long in a more or less unified fashion without implosion. It runs completely counter to every principle of noobism! Even maintaining focus on a single task is beyond any ordinary noob. Posts: 14579 | Registered: Saturday, December 1 2001 08:00 |
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Councilor
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written Saturday, April 1 2006 14:07
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Originally by Alorael: quote:Artistic liscense and the fact that the ur-noob is in charge of them. Besides, they're too stupid to realize they're working together. Blatant ad! (Sorry about the stretchingly-large size of it, but Dikiyoba would rather not mess with resizing it.) Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00 |
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Law Bringer
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written Sunday, April 2 2006 13:42
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I'm confused... how did all of us die? There are only four people left, and I saw no mention of my own death. -------------------- Gamble with Gaea, and she eats your dice. I hate undead. I really, really, really, really hate undead. With a passion. Posts: 4130 | Registered: Friday, March 26 2004 08:00 |
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Councilor
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written Sunday, April 2 2006 13:47
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You saw a spoiler. I've been altering the appearances page as I write the final scene, which isn't up yet. Anyone in italics isn't dead yet. Someone post below so Dikiyoba can bump the thread when the final scene is up without having to double post. Dikiyoba is strange like that. Edit: Technically, there's six. The surviving mods have been overlooked again. [ Sunday, April 02, 2006 13:51: Message edited by: Dikiyoba ] Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00 |
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Guardian
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written Sunday, April 2 2006 13:52
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Glad to oblige, Dikiyoba. #250 is getting closer and closer... -------------------- Spam, spam, spam! I don't like spam! - Monty Python Posts: 1509 | Registered: Tuesday, January 10 2006 08:00 |
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Law Bringer
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written Sunday, April 2 2006 13:56
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quote:Oh come on! That's unfair! If I'm going to die, I don't want to see it coming! -------------------- Gamble with Gaea, and she eats your dice. I hate undead. I really, really, really, really hate undead. With a passion. Posts: 4130 | Registered: Friday, March 26 2004 08:00 |
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Councilor
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written Sunday, April 2 2006 15:34
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The script is now finished. Read and then discuss. You may list your favorite line, your reaction to the latest scene, things that could be done to improve the script, or suggest a more preferable way to die. Go. Dikiyoba. Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00 |
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Master
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written Sunday, April 2 2006 15:44
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Everybody ends up dead? Nice :) -------------------- Polaris - owns you. Undead Theories - double U slash E Posts: 3323 | Registered: Thursday, April 25 2002 07:00 |
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Law Bringer
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written Sunday, April 2 2006 15:52
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As depressing of an ending as it has, I'm pleased to see that I brought down the biggest undead of them all... And I half expected SPOILER. -------------------- Gamble with Gaea, and she eats your dice. I hate undead. I really, really, really, really hate undead. With a passion. Posts: 4130 | Registered: Friday, March 26 2004 08:00 |
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Master
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written Sunday, April 2 2006 15:56
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quote:NO WAY UR-NOOB WILL RULE THE WORLD!!!11!!111!!!1 [ Sunday, April 02, 2006 15:57: Message edited by: Ur-Noob ] -------------------- -ben4808 Posts: 3360 | Registered: Friday, June 25 2004 07:00 |
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Veteran*
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written Sunday, April 2 2006 15:56
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Hey, I was in there at the very end almost. Go me. Hmm, I also seemed to be obsessed with UBB quirks :P . [ Sunday, April 02, 2006 15:59: Message edited by: Mysterious Man ] Posts: 455 | Registered: Tuesday, May 17 2005 07:00 |
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Infiltrator
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written Sunday, April 2 2006 16:09
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Yay! I was right! Kinda... -------------------- But I don't want to ride the elevator. Posts: 420 | Registered: Sunday, January 8 2006 08:00 |
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Shock Trooper
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written Sunday, April 2 2006 16:12
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Wonderfully tragic. -------------------- Do not meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy, and taste good with ketchup. Posts: 256 | Registered: Monday, October 8 2001 07:00 |
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Lifecrafter
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written Sunday, April 2 2006 16:21
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From one of your earlier scenes I was under the impression that the ur-noob had some kind of vendetta against Jeff, and this was why he was attacking the forum. I thought it was hunting the admins so it could get to him, but maybe I misread the scene or you changed your mind. -------------------- Guaranteed to blow your mind. Frostbite: Get It While It's...... Hot? Posts: 900 | Registered: Monday, August 8 2005 07:00 |
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Law Bringer
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written Sunday, April 2 2006 16:31
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This time, I know that I am not confusing anyone's gender. spy.there is most definately not a guy. -------------------- "You're drinking liquor because you're thirsty? How nasty is your freaking water?" —Lazarus Spiderweb Chat Room Avernum RP • Summaries • OoC • Roster Shadow Vale - My site, home of the Spiderweb Chat Database, BoA Scenario Database, & the A1 Quest List, among other things. Posts: 1556 | Registered: Sunday, November 20 2005 08:00 |
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Skip to My Lou
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written Sunday, April 2 2006 17:16
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I haven't been keeping up until just now. I love my dying line :D . And I like the ending too. EDIT: Oh, and does anyone remember what thread I first posted the turtle pics in? I'm curious, but not enough to search through the archives without even a thread name. And I'll remember to update my site this week! I swear! [ Sunday, April 02, 2006 17:18: Message edited by: Archmage Alex ] -------------------- Take the Personality Test! Deep down, you wish you were a stick figure. Posts: 1629 | Registered: Wednesday, October 3 2001 07:00 |
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Guardian
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written Sunday, April 2 2006 17:20
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How disappointing. I died and never got a good role. Anyway...will there be some cheesy plot device that brings everyone back to life for a sequel? :P -------------------- -Zephyr Tempest, your personal entertainer Posts: 1779 | Registered: Monday, December 9 2002 08:00 |
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Lifecrafter
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written Sunday, April 2 2006 17:34
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-Manic Laughter- Spite you! Spite you! HAHAHAHAHA! I don't win, but neither can you! HAHA! -------------------- The Silent Assassin thinks that my reaction is ironic. I don't care. -------------------- -Lenar Labs What's Your Destiny? Ushmushmeifa: Lenar's power is almighty and ineffable. All hail lord Noric, god of... well, something important, I'm sure. Posts: 735 | Registered: Monday, January 16 2006 08:00 |
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Shock Trooper
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written Sunday, April 2 2006 23:16
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I won, right? -------------------- ~Note : The professional newbie's advice should not be taken seriously, or at all.~ LINKAGE Posts: 364 | Registered: Saturday, January 17 2004 08:00 |
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Law Bringer
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written Monday, April 3 2006 04:56
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quote:DIE. That felt oddly appropriate... -------------------- Encyclopaedia Ermariana • Forum Archives • Forum Statistics • RSS [Topic / Forum] My Blog • Polaris • I eat novels for breakfast. Polaris is dead, long live Polaris. Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair. Posts: 8752 | Registered: Wednesday, May 14 2003 07:00 |
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Shock Trooper
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written Monday, April 3 2006 05:04
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I absolutely loved the Rentar-Blaze part. :D Posts: 363 | Registered: Wednesday, February 22 2006 08:00 |
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Guardian
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written Monday, April 3 2006 09:13
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By Zephyr Tempest: quote:There had better be. The Evil Overlord always inexplicably returns in a sequel. -------------------- Post #250! Wheeeeeeeee!!! Posts: 1509 | Registered: Tuesday, January 10 2006 08:00 |