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Councilor
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Profile Homepage #475
Sorry that there wasn't a scene yesterday. I was hit by an attack of real life. But I finally have Act 11, Scene 1 done and up. And I've already started work on the final scene. It's going to be very long.

Dikiyoba saw an add for turtles on Dikiyoba's website today. No, they weren't fluffy. One of them was claiming that it didn't have eyes, though.

Edit: Top of page twenty! And post number 895! These are good numbers for tracking myself.

[ Saturday, April 01, 2006 11:20: Message edited by: Dikiyoba ]
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Infiltrator
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Profile #476
Does anyone else have the nagging suspicion that the Ur-Noob will die of a cold just when all seems lost?

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But I don't want to ride the elevator.
Posts: 420 | Registered: Sunday, January 8 2006 08:00
Infiltrator
Member # 2836
Profile #477
How could a beast of fire die of cold?
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Law Bringer
Member # 335
Profile Homepage #478
If it kills Martians...

—Alorael, who can't understand how noobs can persist so long in a more or less unified fashion without implosion. It runs completely counter to every principle of noobism! Even maintaining focus on a single task is beyond any ordinary noob.
Posts: 14579 | Registered: Saturday, December 1 2001 08:00
Councilor
Member # 6600
Profile Homepage #479
Originally by Alorael:

quote:
—Alorael, who can't understand how noobs can persist so long in a more or less unified fashion without implosion. It runs completely counter to every principle of noobism! Even maintaining focus on a single task is beyond any ordinary noob.
Artistic liscense and the fact that the ur-noob is in charge of them. Besides, they're too stupid to realize they're working together.

Blatant ad!

(Sorry about the stretchingly-large size of it, but Dikiyoba would rather not mess with resizing it.)
Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00
Law Bringer
Member # 4153
Profile Homepage #480
I'm confused... how did all of us die? There are only four people left, and I saw no mention of my own death.

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Gamble with Gaea, and she eats your dice.

I hate undead. I really, really, really, really hate undead. With a passion.
Posts: 4130 | Registered: Friday, March 26 2004 08:00
Councilor
Member # 6600
Profile Homepage #481
You saw a spoiler. I've been altering the appearances page as I write the final scene, which isn't up yet. Anyone in italics isn't dead yet.

Someone post below so Dikiyoba can bump the thread when the final scene is up without having to double post. Dikiyoba is strange like that.

Edit: Technically, there's six. The surviving mods have been overlooked again.

[ Sunday, April 02, 2006 13:51: Message edited by: Dikiyoba ]
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Guardian
Member # 6670
Profile Homepage #482
Glad to oblige, Dikiyoba. #250 is getting closer and closer...

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Law Bringer
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Profile Homepage #483
quote:
Originally written by Dikiyoba:

You saw a spoiler. I've been altering the appearances page as I write the final scene, which isn't up yet. Anyone in italics isn't dead yet.
Oh come on! That's unfair!

If I'm going to die, I don't want to see it coming!

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Gamble with Gaea, and she eats your dice.

I hate undead. I really, really, really, really hate undead. With a passion.
Posts: 4130 | Registered: Friday, March 26 2004 08:00
Councilor
Member # 6600
Profile Homepage #484
The script is now finished. Read and then discuss. You may list your favorite line, your reaction to the latest scene, things that could be done to improve the script, or suggest a more preferable way to die. Go.

Dikiyoba.
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Master
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Profile Homepage #485
Everybody ends up dead? Nice :)

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Undead Theories - double U slash E
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Law Bringer
Member # 4153
Profile Homepage #486
As depressing of an ending as it has, I'm pleased to see that I brought down the biggest undead of them all...

And I half expected SPOILER.

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Gamble with Gaea, and she eats your dice.

I hate undead. I really, really, really, really hate undead. With a passion.
Posts: 4130 | Registered: Friday, March 26 2004 08:00
Master
Member # 4614
Profile Homepage #487
quote:
Originally written by Wonko The Sane:

Does anyone else have the nagging suspicion that the Ur-Noob will die of a cold just when all seems lost?
NO WAY UR-NOOB WILL RULE THE WORLD!!!11!!111!!!1

[ Sunday, April 02, 2006 15:57: Message edited by: Ur-Noob ]

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Posts: 3360 | Registered: Friday, June 25 2004 07:00
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Member # 5
Profile #488
Hey, I was in there at the very end almost. Go me.

Hmm, I also seemed to be obsessed with UBB quirks :P .

[ Sunday, April 02, 2006 15:59: Message edited by: Mysterious Man ]
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Infiltrator
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Profile #489
Yay! I was right!

Kinda...

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But I don't want to ride the elevator.
Posts: 420 | Registered: Sunday, January 8 2006 08:00
Shock Trooper
Member # 125
Profile #490
Wonderfully tragic.

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Do not meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy, and taste good with ketchup.
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Lifecrafter
Member # 6193
Profile Homepage #491
From one of your earlier scenes I was under the impression that the ur-noob had some kind of vendetta against Jeff, and this was why he was attacking the forum. I thought it was hunting the admins so it could get to him, but maybe I misread the scene or you changed your mind.

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Frostbite: Get It While It's...... Hot?
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Law Bringer
Member # 6489
Profile Homepage #492
This time, I know that I am not confusing anyone's gender. spy.there is most definately not a guy.

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Skip to My Lou
Member # 40
Profile Homepage #493
I haven't been keeping up until just now. I love my dying line :D . And I like the ending too.

EDIT: Oh, and does anyone remember what thread I first posted the turtle pics in? I'm curious, but not enough to search through the archives without even a thread name.

And I'll remember to update my site this week! I swear!

[ Sunday, April 02, 2006 17:18: Message edited by: Archmage Alex ]

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Deep down, you wish you were a stick figure.
Posts: 1629 | Registered: Wednesday, October 3 2001 07:00
Guardian
Member # 2339
Profile #494
How disappointing. I died and never got a good role.

Anyway...will there be some cheesy plot device that brings everyone back to life for a sequel? :P

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-Zephyr Tempest, your personal entertainer
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Profile Homepage #495
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Spite you! Spite you!
HAHAHAHAHA!
I don't win, but neither can you!
HAHA!

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The Silent Assassin thinks that my reaction is ironic.
I don't care.

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All hail lord Noric, god of... well, something important, I'm sure.
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Shock Trooper
Member # 3898
Profile #496
I won, right?

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Posts: 364 | Registered: Saturday, January 17 2004 08:00
Law Bringer
Member # 2984
Profile Homepage #497
quote:
Originally written by Dikiyoba:

Arancaytar dies
DIE.

That felt oddly appropriate...

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Shock Trooper
Member # 6821
Profile #498
I absolutely loved the Rentar-Blaze part. :D
Posts: 363 | Registered: Wednesday, February 22 2006 08:00
Guardian
Member # 6670
Profile Homepage #499
By Zephyr Tempest:
quote:
Anyway...will there be some cheesy plot device that brings everyone back to life for a sequel?
There had better be. The Evil Overlord always inexplicably returns in a sequel.

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Post #250! Wheeeeeeeee!!!
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