Episode 4: Spiderweb Reloaded. Something like that anyway.

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Surpisingly well written. It's just too bad I haven't heard of this before.
Read them in order!

That is, I assume that you haven't.

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assumptions are dangerous. so is ordering people around. but I cannot control my impulse to obey bottles containing liquid originating from the mammary glands of cattle. so read I shall :D

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Shaper
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Meh. Episode one was okay at the time, I'll admit. But looking back now it just feels a tad dated and basic. Dikiyoba's writing style and ability to write a story has just grown loads since then - I'd recommend starting at Episode 2 and then reading the first one later.

Episode 4 is my favourite so far, because it actually feels like a real story and not fanfic written for other people.

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assumptions are dangerous. so is ordering people around.
It did not seem like that to me.

Oh, and Episode 1 is pretty good. Episode 2 is okay. Episode 3 is a little better than Episode 2. And Episode 4 is so long that I can't comment on it.

Also, since she started 4...she has to do 5 and 6. Then again, I have a...umm...interesting personality.

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Don't judge a sentence until you know all the words.
Muffins n' Hell|Muffins n' Hell: The Muffins Are Back Again
Muffins n' Hell: The End is Near
Not in your shed -We are sort of done. Helpful criticism is welcome.
Everyone, just call me Iffy. Please.

Be grateful you have your unsellabe trowels -Goldenking

Just so you know, I am working on Muffins n' Hell the scenario.
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My favorite is Episode 5, and worst is Episode 7.

I hope to be pleasantly surprised by Episode 8.

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Nalyd suspects that the only reason that he is on the list of included Spiderwebbers is to stop him from whining.

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More likely is that you are over a 1000 posts and now have a distinct personality unlike the generic newbie you were during Episode 3.
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Chapter 3: Enough Is Enough

Dikiyoba is still taking requests for appearances.

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I was about to say you prematurely vanquished the villain, but then I remembered Mr. Nondescript Spammer.

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I was reading over the newest addition, very well written and what not, and instead of imps I read L imps. That and the meatshield made me think I've been playing to much KOL. Doesn't mean I'm stopping though.

EDIT: Who guesses the snurgaff thing will end up being summoned to save SWMB from mister bot master?

EDIT2: Fixed Snurgaff's name.

[ Saturday, September 01, 2007 13:05: Message edited by: Loathingking ]

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Heh. I like.

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Synergy, et al - "I don't get it."

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I found spiderweb software because of those stories.

And i must say, they rock!

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Law Bringer
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Yeah, you really need to get him out of that forcecage so you can aim properly."
Actually you can't attack them while they're in a forcecage.

Nice story, since I get a major role this chapter. Although with the summonings stopped things will quiet down until the Nameless One attacks.
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Requests? I request to be in every chapter, here on out!
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Originally written by Zephious Shadowsong:

I found spiderweb software because of those stories.
I saw this awesome parody on Youtube once and realized I just had to get the DVD of the actual movie. :P

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I request to be in it a little so maybe I'll be more interested in it. (I couldn't get through the third.) Also, people deliver messages on behalf of TM, so we could see him that way, I guess.

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Originally by Randomizer:

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Actually you can't attack them while they're in a forcecage.
Yeah, but being nitpicky about the rules isn't much fun. :P

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I request to be in it a little so maybe I'll be more interested in it.
What would you like to be called?

Dikiyoba.

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Don't care. Shard of Fire, I guess. Maybe I could change the name to a buncha stupid stuff like in real life, though. Up to you.

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Originally written by Dikiyoba:

Dikiyoba is still taking requests for appearances.
I wouldn't mind being a minor character. Not asking to be included in every chapter, maybe one or two if it isn't too much trouble. Lord Drythentor is highly skilled with a quarterstaff or a sword.

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Ooh! Nalyd is apparently evil. And a pushover. And annoying. Meaning, he is fodder. Albeit, very calm fodder.

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At least have a part where Iffy saves someone.
Or helps someone. Or at least just not be annoying. I am not Nalyd.

Also, well...actually I have nothing more to add.

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Muffins n' Hell|Muffins n' Hell: The Muffins Are Back Again
Muffins n' Hell: The End is Near
Not in your shed -We are sort of done. Helpful criticism is welcome.
Everyone, just call me Iffy. Please.

Be grateful you have your unsellabe trowels -Goldenking

Just so you know, I am working on Muffins n' Hell the scenario.
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Shaper
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Originally written by An Iffy Shaped Milk Bottle:

Also, well...actually I have nothing more to add.
Spiderwebbers past, present, and future are now cheering ecstatically. :P

Dikiyoba, may I make a small request? I'd like it if a few BoE priest spells were added to my character's roster, since I've been playing that recently. I'm not looking for Divine Thud or Avatar, I just think it'd give my character a little more variety.

[ Sunday, September 02, 2007 14:59: Message edited by: Nioca ]

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Originally written by An Iffy Shaped Milk Bottle:

At least have a part where Iffy saves someone.
Or helps someone. Or at least just not be annoying. I am not Nalyd.

Also, well...actually I have nothing more to add.

Try the other way around. Nalyd needs to do something. Like kill someone unsuspecting. Or cause someone to die indirectly. Kind of like I caused the death of Alorael in Episode 1.

I know what you can do. You can document how everything happens in the script. Since you made two scripts.

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Try the other way around. Nalyd needs to do something. Like kill someone unsuspecting. Or cause someone to die indirectly. Kind of like I caused the death of Alorael in Episode 1.

Now that I think about it, Infernal Flamming Muffin would do that so he can laugh. And laugh he shall. Then he smiles and takes out a Balm of Life and, well, revives them.

Did it to me once.

Edit- typo

[ Sunday, September 02, 2007 15:22: Message edited by: An Iffy Shaped Milk Bottle ]

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Don't judge a sentence until you know all the words.
Muffins n' Hell|Muffins n' Hell: The Muffins Are Back Again
Muffins n' Hell: The End is Near
Not in your shed -We are sort of done. Helpful criticism is welcome.
Everyone, just call me Iffy. Please.

Be grateful you have your unsellabe trowels -Goldenking

Just so you know, I am working on Muffins n' Hell the scenario.
Posts: 1799 | Registered: Sunday, February 4 2007 08:00

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