RP: Around the human body in however long it takes!
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Lifecrafter
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written Thursday, May 6 2004 10:38
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Another set of violent tremors rocks the MicroSpider as it is knocked back on course by a nacho chip shaken loose by the rollercoaster. The MicroSpider breaks through the stomach wall in the precut area and heads for a blood vessel as the rollercoaster ride comes to an end. It stops short of the blood vessel wall and waits for Alec's instructions on entering it. -------------------------------------- Jonnie: "LET ME OFF OF THIS THING!!!!" Jonnie runs away from the theme park and starts heading for home while drinking another soda, still clutching his stomach from the slight pain. -------------------------------------- Plah tries to bring Milla back to her senses so she can help him with the professor, but has no luck in doing so. He then tries to awaken Professor Dumdum, and gets no response there either. Plah: "BLAST!! Now what do I do?!! Hmmmm... AHA!! I know...I will go get some of those smoothies off of Alex. Maybe they will help. Don't go anywhere Milla, watch the Professor." He starts heading towards the Command room to get the smoothies while Milla continues to babble to herself. She eventually gets up and starts wandering the ship in a delirious fog. -------------------- (Looks around in the Study) Colonel Mustard: "Just checking." Mrs. Peacock: "Everything all right?" Colonel Mustard: "Yep. Two corpses. Everything's fine." "Keep your wits about you, the game is afoot!!" - Sherlock Holmes Posts: 935 | Registered: Friday, August 8 2003 07:00 |
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Agent
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written Thursday, May 6 2004 16:14
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The Hawaiian roller coaster ride was over, thankfully. Danny was alone again; somehow he was too slow to catch up with whoever he finds. Ah well. He starts to look for company in the ship. As he conducts his search he comes back to the room with the fridge bears and it gives him a slight chill. He walks further on. After what seemed like forever (which was actually 2:40 minutes) he comes across a man leaning against a wall; he seems to be sleeping. Danny: Hm, hey, must be time for some sleep. Is it eleven in the evening already? Danny sits beside the man and goes to sleep. -------------------- You go girl! All are lunatics, but he who can analyze his delusion is called a philosopher. - Ambrose Bierce If at first you don't succeed, destroy all evidence that you tried. Posts: 1158 | Registered: Monday, December 31 2001 08:00 |
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Lifecrafter
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written Saturday, May 8 2004 09:12
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Alex stands at his command post and talks to Zik. Alex: "What's the damage?" Zik: "Other than maybe lots of this knocked over in the ship, we are okay. I think one of the bears fell out of a doorway and into the stomach though." Alex: "Ewwwwe! That won't settle well. Well, where are we currently?" Zik: "We are parked outside of a blood vessel. How should we go about entering it?" Alex: "Use the mechanical arms to hold us in place and use the laser to carefully slice an opening in the vessel wall. Be careful not to make it too big, or he will start bleeding and we will have a big problem on our hands." Zik: "Well, here goes nothing." The robotic arms clamp down on a nerve for support and it causes several jolts to go through Jonnie's body. Jonnie: "YAHHHHHHHH!!! What's doing that!!! YAHHHHHHHHH!!!" The laser carefully slices into the vessel and makes a big enough hole for the MicroSpider to pass through. As they enter the bloodstream, the current pushes them along too quickly and they have to fire the retro-rockets to keep them in one place. Alex turns on the PA system and makes an announcement. Alex: "Can I have everyone's attention please? We have made out of the stomach are now in Jonnie's bloodstream. If you look above you, you will see in the vessel walls in the MicroSpider's spotlight's." Ooohs and ahhhs can be heard from various parts of the ship. Alex: We are now going to head around the body, and then come back to the heart. From there, we will float around the brain for a while. I don't know for sure what we sill do after that." The MicroSpider proceeds to float down the bloodstream. -------------------- (Looks around in the Study) Colonel Mustard: "Just checking." Mrs. Peacock: "Everything all right?" Colonel Mustard: "Yep. Two corpses. Everything's fine." "Keep your wits about you, the game is afoot!!" - Sherlock Holmes Posts: 935 | Registered: Friday, August 8 2003 07:00 |
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Agent
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written Saturday, May 8 2004 09:15
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And then suddenly two late candidates enter the stage. George- Damnit Fred! We were supposed to be here months ago! Fred- Not my fault that there was a half-price specail on little boy's pants. And with a small technical ajustment to the headset providing simple instructions how to get through the body, the two race towards the lungs, and beyond. -------------------- Espresso hasn't been invented yet. That stinks. Xian Skull- Avernum 3 Posts: 1287 | Registered: Thursday, August 14 2003 07:00 |
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Lifecrafter
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written Saturday, May 8 2004 16:59
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OOC Sherlock: Isn't it ADoS, not Alex, that's in charge if the ship? Or are you assuming that because everybody wants a part of Alex, that he's the one who should be controlling? -------------------- "Oh, North Wind, why frighten others? In Nature's family all are brothers. Puff and blow and wheeze and hiss; You can't frighten Shingebiss. Bring your frost and ice and snow; I'm still free to come and go. You can never frighten me, One who never fears is FREE!" -Shingebiss, the mighty duck Posts: 830 | Registered: Tuesday, August 20 2002 07:00 |
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Lifecrafter
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written Saturday, May 8 2004 20:41
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ADoS abandoned his RP and as far as I, or anyone else in the RP is concerned, he no longer exists in it anymore. You can control his character, but he won't be coming back to take control of it anytime in the future. I have been waiting for him to come around and take over his character's role again since the RP has started up once more, but he never did come back. Why should we keep using a character in the RP that the original person who created it doesn't even care about anymore? We never do that in other RPs. Once a character is abandoned, it isn't used anymore. It just dies or fades into the background. I asked him to come back to his RP because I was going to keep it going and he told me that as far as he was concerned, the RP died a while ago. So, I ask again...why bother? -------------------- (Looks around in the Study) Colonel Mustard: "Just checking." Mrs. Peacock: "Everything all right?" Colonel Mustard: "Yep. Two corpses. Everything's fine." "Keep your wits about you, the game is afoot!!" - Sherlock Holmes Posts: 935 | Registered: Friday, August 8 2003 07:00 |
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Lifecrafter
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written Sunday, May 9 2004 09:19
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OOC: Okay, that's what I thought, I just wasn't sure if his character was still being controlled or not. Thanks. -------------------- "Oh, North Wind, why frighten others? In Nature's family all are brothers. Puff and blow and wheeze and hiss; You can't frighten Shingebiss. Bring your frost and ice and snow; I'm still free to come and go. You can never frighten me, One who never fears is FREE!" -Shingebiss, the mighty duck Posts: 830 | Registered: Tuesday, August 20 2002 07:00 |
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Skip to My Lou
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written Saturday, May 15 2004 09:35
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Through an odd series of events (part of which I was not even present for) I seemingly became commander of the ship. However, I now repeat feelings similar to those I have already expressed: This RP is, in fact, dead. It is seems to be being held together by a sheer effort of will by Sherlock and token efforts from the rest of us. I no longer wished to continue in this RP. This leaves us with 4 options: 1. we can just let the thing die. 2. Some one else can take control. 3. I can write a exciting action-filled ending. 4. I can write a brief anti-climatic ending. What shall it be? [ Saturday, May 15, 2004 09:37: Message edited by: Archmage Alex ] -------------------- Need a pet? Need cheap labor? Buy a Moose! Take the Personality Test! INTJ 100% 78% 44% 44% Huzzah for the Masterminds! Posts: 1629 | Registered: Wednesday, October 3 2001 07:00 |
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Infiltrator
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written Saturday, May 15 2004 19:00
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Number four. I don't like exciting endings. --Jonah Zahndi Zolohahni -------------------- —Jonah Zahndi Zolohahni Jonnie's Domain. JDF — Jonnie's Domain Forums. Posts: 549 | Registered: Thursday, October 17 2002 07:00 |
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Shock Trooper
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written Saturday, May 15 2004 19:50
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333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333. In a related story, Izzannor picked option 3 offered by Alex. -------------------- ALBATROSS!!! -John Cleese !!!Long live Monty Python!!! Not a Chance! Long Live The Weather Balloons! Posts: 304 | Registered: Monday, May 27 2002 07:00 |
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Guardian
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written Sunday, May 16 2004 04:25
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I guess I'll vote for 3. -------------------- Entertaining songs !Click here to get to the misc. boards! Attack, icons, attack!THIS PAGE ROCKS!! Vicious virus stalks the web, has already infected over 200 computers: read more! "AH-CHOO!" -George Washington Posts: 1779 | Registered: Monday, December 9 2002 08:00 |
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Agent
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written Sunday, May 16 2004 05:10
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Ah, I guess I'll go for 3. Exciting endings=good. -------------------- You go girl! All are lunatics, but he who can analyze his delusion is called a philosopher. - Ambrose Bierce If at first you don't succeed, destroy all evidence that you tried. Posts: 1158 | Registered: Monday, December 31 2001 08:00 |
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Lifecrafter
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written Sunday, May 16 2004 08:16
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EDIT: Actually, I want to take 2. I could do that, even if it IS my first RP. [ Sunday, May 16, 2004 08:17: Message edited by: Desert Ploo ] -------------------- "Oh, North Wind, why frighten others? In Nature's family all are brothers. Puff and blow and wheeze and hiss; You can't frighten Shingebiss. Bring your frost and ice and snow; I'm still free to come and go. You can never frighten me, One who never fears is FREE!" -Shingebiss, the mighty duck Posts: 830 | Registered: Tuesday, August 20 2002 07:00 |
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Skip to My Lou
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written Sunday, May 16 2004 18:03
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That gives 1 for #4, 3 for #3, and 1 #2. Unless a couple more people speak up it is looking like #3. -------------------- Need a pet? Need cheap labor? Buy a Moose! Take the Personality Test! INTJ 100% 78% 44% 44% Huzzah for the Masterminds! Posts: 1629 | Registered: Wednesday, October 3 2001 07:00 |
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Lifecrafter
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written Sunday, May 16 2004 18:12
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Well, #2 doesn't really need voting on. If someone were to pick it up, and hit it like it's one of those undead topics that keeps going around? I want to try to exercise what skill I have as a writer and get some responsiblity here. Pleeeeese? -------------------- "Oh, North Wind, why frighten others? In Nature's family all are brothers. Puff and blow and wheeze and hiss; You can't frighten Shingebiss. Bring your frost and ice and snow; I'm still free to come and go. You can never frighten me, One who never fears is FREE!" -Shingebiss, the mighty duck Posts: 830 | Registered: Tuesday, August 20 2002 07:00 |
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Agent
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written Monday, May 17 2004 13:31
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If Plah really thinks he can do it, by all means. Otherwise #3. -------------------- I like to say quack because I can, I like to say moooo because I can, but I don't like saying ergle flmp because I can never pronounce phenomenon first try. In conclusion, quack, moooo and phenonemenonmenonnon... Oh Poo. http://s4.invisionfree.com/Ultimate_RP/index.php Try it! Posts: 1487 | Registered: Sunday, February 10 2002 08:00 |
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Lifecrafter
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written Monday, May 17 2004 19:08
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Sorry, I have been distracted by love. I guess it could go as either 3 or 2. As I have run out of ideas for keeping it alive, I wouldn't mind someone else taking over. But Plah, it would be better to wait for a better RP. Perhaps we could all work together to plan a better one. ADoS's RPs just aren't made to survive I guess. Therefore, I vote for 3. It just isn't worth keeping it alive when no one care's. Just try not to kill us Alex. -------------------- (Looks around in the Study) Colonel Mustard: "Just checking." Mrs. Peacock: "Everything all right?" Colonel Mustard: "Yep. Two corpses. Everything's fine." "Keep your wits about you, the game is afoot!!" - Sherlock Holmes Posts: 935 | Registered: Friday, August 8 2003 07:00 |
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Bob's Big Date
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written Monday, May 17 2004 19:43
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quote:This is, for the record, the best excuse ever. -------------------- AnamaFreak (3:59:56 AM): Shounen-ai to the MAX ...there really is nothing that can compare to hot gay sex with a mythological icon. --665 Posts: 2367 | Registered: Friday, June 27 2003 07:00 |
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Lifecrafter
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written Tuesday, May 18 2004 03:43
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quote:I agree. Ok, go ahead w #3. [ Tuesday, May 18, 2004 13:34: Message edited by: Desert Ploop ] -------------------- "Oh, North Wind, why frighten others? In Nature's family all are brothers. Puff and blow and wheeze and hiss; You can't frighten Shingebiss. Bring your frost and ice and snow; I'm still free to come and go. You can never frighten me, One who never fears is FREE!" -Shingebiss, the mighty duck Posts: 830 | Registered: Tuesday, August 20 2002 07:00 |
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Skip to My Lou
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written Tuesday, May 18 2004 12:55
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You mean 3? 2=you take over. -------------------- Need a pet? Need cheap labor? Buy a Moose! Take the Personality Test! INTJ 100% 78% 44% 44% Huzzah for the Masterminds! Posts: 1629 | Registered: Wednesday, October 3 2001 07:00 |
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Skip to My Lou
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written Tuesday, May 18 2004 12:57
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Blasted double post! [ Tuesday, May 18, 2004 12:58: Message edited by: Archmage Alex ] -------------------- Need a pet? Need cheap labor? Buy a Moose! Take the Personality Test! INTJ 100% 78% 44% 44% Huzzah for the Masterminds! Posts: 1629 | Registered: Wednesday, October 3 2001 07:00 |
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Lifecrafter
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written Tuesday, May 18 2004 13:33
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Ummm?I don't know what you're talking about.[/attempted Jedi hand wave like Alec, fails sadly] -------------------- "Oh, North Wind, why frighten others? In Nature's family all are brothers. Puff and blow and wheeze and hiss; You can't frighten Shingebiss. Bring your frost and ice and snow; I'm still free to come and go. You can never frighten me, One who never fears is FREE!" -Shingebiss, the mighty duck Posts: 830 | Registered: Tuesday, August 20 2002 07:00 |