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Originally written by Lazarus.:

[b]Wow.

I was originally thinking of joining this RP with the sole intention of messing things up and generally screwing with Goldenking, but I have to tip my cap to you guys-- you have the situation under control. Couldn't have done it any better myself.

As amusing as it is to see him get a taste of his own medicine, I really have to feel sorry for the guy right now. The sooner you nuke this thing the sooner you can start forgetting it ever happened.

Just throwing that out there.[/b]

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Originally written by Iffy:

Goldenking -Muffins eat meat, okay. And magick is used to disolve it and turn it into more magick, which fuels them. And muffins breed fast. And he can mate with more than one.

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Originally written by Iffy:

Is it okay now? Or do I need to make more revisions?

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Originally written by Iffy:

What is wrong with muffins?

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Originally written by Goldenking:

Iffy: There are many, many things wrong with your character. Here is how I'd do your character, with my revisions in italics. If you really want this character, keep it. However, you'd have to work very hard to make this fit in with the RP.

Name: Muffinto the 18th
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Height: [i]10"-6'[/i}
Weight: 2 pounds at 10in, 15 at 6ft
Magick: Can cast many fire spells and can cast a healing spell.
Skills: Controlled Growth, High Jumping. (Omitted Biting, which isn't a skill, and changed phrasing)
Occupation: Disciple of Iffy, God of Baked Goods
Biography: My name is Muffinto the 18th. However, I was born unusually powerful and I have been named First Disciple of Iffy. And I am loyal to the all powerful Iffy and The Creator.

We muffins are a secretive race. (Omitted the stuff about only those loyal to the creator know you) And we serve Iffy, who serves the Creator along with us.

We have a brief history. As one of Iffy's gifts, a loyal human was taught by Iffy himself on how to create magical muffins (Iffy can't teach anyone once he's exiled). It is extremely complicated, but he learned anyway.

He found a secure location, where he began the spell. Afterwards, five muffins were summoned. They were taught everything, they were good students. "Begin a society of muffins," were his orders. "And serve The Creator. Fight the Anama." (No cannibalism for you)

We have formed a society, and I have fathered 152 muffins (No you haven't. Try ten.). I have been asked to do very dangerous missions. But the Anama are challenging, so I am very enthusiastic. Sometimes I have had to escape, and I am very good at doing that. I am currently at home, with all the other muffins, in a hidden cove southeast of Cape Town.

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Originally written by Elastikon:

Let's give Goldenking some support here. Even in the Avernum RP he did accept feedback on his ridiculous faction, eventually, and bow out. And his posts demonstrate a clear and substantial increase in maturity since then.

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