Things to improve Dikiyoba's ausome story!
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Infiltrator
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written Thursday, February 8 2007 08:34
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less ambiguous? This is not me!!!  -------------------- "Dikiyoba ... is demon ... drives people mad and ... do all sorts of strange things." "You Spiderwebbians are mad, mad, mad as March hares." Posts: 687 | Registered: Wednesday, January 19 2005 08:00 |
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Law Bringer
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written Thursday, February 8 2007 12:21
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quote: quote:Aran, we need to confer. If our programming has us say the same thing they're going to catch on too quickly. quote:Would it help if "touched" were turned into "moved" in that sentence? Or maybe "flattered" would be bettered. —Alorael, who is at any rate deeply disturbed and not at all touched, moved, or flattered by the depths to which Spidwebbian minds sink. Sometimes a touch is just a touch. Posts: 14579 | Registered: Saturday, December 1 2001 08:00 |
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Shaper
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written Thursday, February 8 2007 13:57
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Sometimes when we touch... the honesty's too much. -------------------- You lose. Posts: 2156 | Registered: Thursday, August 24 2006 07:00 |
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written Thursday, February 8 2007 16:03
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I hope this doesn't turn into a song that the whole world needs to sing. -------------------- quote: Posts: 4114 | Registered: Monday, April 25 2005 07:00 |
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Shaper
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written Thursday, February 8 2007 17:51
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quote:People are full of surprises...one thing I love about them. It can be surprisingly difficult to tell who is female around here. Which perhaps might give some pause to our ideas about what each gender is supposed to be "like." -S- -------------------- A4 Item Locations A4 Singleton G4 Items List G4 Forging List The Insidious Infiltrator Posts: 2009 | Registered: Monday, September 12 2005 07:00 |
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Shock Trooper
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written Friday, February 9 2007 03:12
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Episode 3...so full of 'said's *twitch* -------------------- Aa' menle nauva calen ar' ta hwesta e' ale'quenle, melloneamin. --------------------- Finder of impossible beta testing errors. Posts: 364 | Registered: Saturday, July 5 2003 07:00 |
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Apprentice
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written Friday, February 9 2007 13:54
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Perhaps add me and my sayings of stupidity? Some examples: "Behold, the power of stupidity!" (after I/a friend/anyone do(es) something stupid "ORC FURY!!!!!!!!" (before entering berserk mode) "AW CRAP!" (after something bad happens) Posts: 10 | Registered: Monday, January 15 2007 08:00 |
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Guardian
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written Friday, February 9 2007 17:01
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Maybe. Post a hundred more times, and then we'll stop pretending you're dead. -------------------- May the fires of Undeath burn in your soul, and consume it. Posts: 1636 | Registered: Wednesday, January 5 2005 08:00 |
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Canned
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written Monday, February 12 2007 23:23
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I think to ameliorate his story more people should be in like Croike and blacknight that make lovely poems in a battle flied when spider webbies are losing. Make more jokes and give a dark and bright side to all of the people involved in your story. Let a spider webbie enter into the dark side to betray the forum and have more creatures in like turrets, battle alphas... And for the illustration perhaps when i can post effectively my artwork on posts i might illustrate Diki's story if he liked my proposition. [ Monday, February 12, 2007 23:51: Message edited by: upon mars ] -------------------- You can jump off a bridge, fire a gun in your mouth, drink poison,or going in to the tiger's pit but you will still end up dead it's a mater of time and how . Posts: 312 | Registered: Sunday, November 26 2006 08:00 |
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Off With Their Heads
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written Tuesday, February 13 2007 07:25
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Just for reference, the normal word for "to make better" in English is "improve." The word "ameliorate" exists, but it is less common. -------------------- Arancaytar: Every time you ask people to compare TM and Kel, you endanger the poor, fluffy kittens. Smoo: Get ready to face the walls! Ephesos: In conclusion, yarr. Kelandon's Pink and Pretty Page!!: the authorized location for all things by me The Archive of all released BoE scenarios ever Posts: 7968 | Registered: Saturday, February 28 2004 08:00 |
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Electric Sheep One
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written Tuesday, February 13 2007 10:50
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Hmmm. Putting turrets into the story. I'd kind of like to see what Dikiyoba could do with that. Maybe a sad, misunderstood turret, who doesn't really want to shoot reapers at people, but can't help it. -------------------- We're not doing cool. We're doing pretty. Posts: 3335 | Registered: Thursday, September 4 2003 07:00 |
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Lifecrafter
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written Tuesday, February 13 2007 10:52
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Nice! I like it! How about an insecure kyshakk? Or A wingbolt that can't stop sneezing? -------------------- You Shall Die Laughing: http://www.worfthecat.ermarian.net/converted The Roost: www.roost01.proboards104.com. Birds of a feather flock together. Posts: 794 | Registered: Thursday, July 27 2006 07:00 |
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Shaper
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written Tuesday, February 13 2007 11:06
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A new chapter might help... -------------------- I tried to think of something witty to put here. Needless to say, I failed. Posts: 2686 | Registered: Friday, September 8 2006 07:00 |
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Infiltrator
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written Tuesday, February 13 2007 11:36
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Yes, a new chapter would help. Posts: 626 | Registered: Monday, April 25 2005 07:00 |
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Councilor
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written Tuesday, February 13 2007 15:03
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Dikiyoba is working on it... Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00 |
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Law Bringer
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written Tuesday, February 13 2007 15:10
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quote:I'm quite comfortable with the current level of GF stuff in the story. If anything, I'd be comfortable with it being even lower. :) -------------------- Encyclopaedia Ermariana • Forum Archives • Forum Statistics • RSS [Topic / Forum] My Blog • Polaris • I eat novels for breakfast. Polaris is dead, long live Polaris. Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair. Posts: 8752 | Registered: Wednesday, May 14 2003 07:00 |
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Canned
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written Tuesday, February 13 2007 16:41
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I hope a new chapter starts soon. The story is progressing interestingly and I am curious as to what fallows, so please hurry up(no rush). [ Saturday, February 17, 2007 11:18: Message edited by: Infernal Flamming Muffin ] -------------------- I can transform into almost anything, though not sanity. Muffins n' Hell. Note that revisions of the first part is down the list. Posts: 1799 | Registered: Sunday, February 4 2007 08:00 |
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Nuke and Pave
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written Tuesday, February 13 2007 17:09
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quote:I don't think there are any fallows in the story. :P (A "fallow" is a field in which nothing has been planted to give land a year to rest.) -------------------- Be careful with a word, as you would with a sword, For it too has the power to kill. However well placed word, unlike a well placed sword, Can also have the power to heal. Posts: 2649 | Registered: Wednesday, October 3 2001 07:00 |
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Guardian
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written Tuesday, February 13 2007 17:30
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More attention to Shaping! Have an army of creations in the Geneforge forums! Or, have the members appear as the creations they resemble in them! Nalyd doesn't know why he's shouting so much! [ Tuesday, February 13, 2007 17:32: Message edited by: Nalyd Twisted ] -------------------- May the fires of Undeath burn in your soul, and consume it. Posts: 1636 | Registered: Wednesday, January 5 2005 08:00 |
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Canned
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written Wednesday, February 14 2007 03:11
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In that case how about an army of nalyads and a bunch of stantroopers!! honestly i think that you shouldn't hammer down diki to a point he doesn't write any more. I think we should wait until the rat problem is deal by the great diki himself before shouting at him. -------------------- You can jump off a bridge, fire a gun in your mouth, drink poison,or going in to the tiger's pit but you will still end up dead it's a mater of time and how . Posts: 312 | Registered: Sunday, November 26 2006 08:00 |
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Law Bringer
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written Wednesday, February 14 2007 07:31
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quote:FYT. Come on, people, it's not that difficult. I'm certain we've been over this... And there's a separate thread for speculation on Dikiyoba's story. It was here before this one. -------------------- Gamble with Gaea, and she eats your dice. I hate undead. I really, really, really, really hate undead. With a passion. Posts: 4130 | Registered: Friday, March 26 2004 08:00 |
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Infiltrator
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written Wednesday, February 14 2007 07:59
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she/he, diki/dinti ... this is my domain (like speaking in the third person is only polite by certain indivs). And I don't share well :mad: -------------------- "Dikiyoba ... is demon ... drives people mad and ... do all sorts of strange things." "You Spiderwebbians are mad, mad, mad as March hares." Posts: 687 | Registered: Wednesday, January 19 2005 08:00 |
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Canned
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written Wednesday, February 14 2007 08:08
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Wait diki is a girl? i need oxygen, i need to breathe air.(suffocating) It's quite difficult to know on the web the difference between genders i am sorry for the mess i caused. [ Wednesday, February 14, 2007 08:13: Message edited by: upon mars ] -------------------- You can jump off a bridge, fire a gun in your mouth, drink poison,or going in to the tiger's pit but you will still end up dead it's a mater of time and how . Posts: 312 | Registered: Sunday, November 26 2006 08:00 |
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Electric Sheep One
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written Wednesday, February 14 2007 08:20
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Fear not. Though computer viruses abound, there have yet to be any authenticated cases of computer cooties. -------------------- We're not doing cool. We're doing pretty. Posts: 3335 | Registered: Thursday, September 4 2003 07:00 |
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Infiltrator
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written Wednesday, February 14 2007 08:40
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quote:I'm not sure if you meant it, but that sounds kinda sexist. Posts: 626 | Registered: Monday, April 25 2005 07:00 |