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Warrior
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written Tuesday, September 19 2006 15:49
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So I have to employ over thirty words in order to get recognition? :P -------------------- Polaris The most merciful thing in the world, I think, is the inability of the human mind to correlate all its contents. We live on a placid island of ignorance in the midst of black seas of infinity, and it was not meant that we should voyage far. - H.P. Lovecraft Posts: 164 | Registered: Wednesday, June 14 2006 07:00 |
Shaper
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written Tuesday, September 19 2006 16:16
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I have some of my music at http://www.myspace.com/zeeqon5 . I took down all my non-musical audial art for now. It also has a short story I wrote (the latest blog entry), a poem I wrote (an earlier blog entry, clearly marked as containing a poem) and several visual art things I made in my Pics section (along with some other people's art, and photographs of course). I like a lot of the stuff in this thread, but I particularly like Nikki's first poem and Kelandon's sonnet. Riibu is also good at evoking emotion through her writing, regardless of how lame the actual subject matter is. Hopefully this thread will last longer than the previous art threads. -------------------- My Myspace, with some of my audial and visual art The Lyceum - The Headquarters of the Blades designing community The Louvre - The Blades of Avernum graphics database Alexandria - The Blades of Exile Scenario database BoE Webring - Self explanatory Polaris - Free porn here Odd Todd - Fun for the unemployed (and everyone else too) They Might Be Giants - Four websites for one of the greatest bands in existance -------------------- 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 Posts: 2957 | Registered: Thursday, October 4 2001 07:00 |
Lifecrafter
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written Tuesday, September 19 2006 17:59
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quote:I had nothing to say about what you wrote. Consider that the highest praise. :P Posts: 794 | Registered: Tuesday, October 11 2005 07:00 |
Cartographer
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written Tuesday, September 19 2006 18:21
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Does that apply to my writings as well? I want praise too! :\ Except with actual words. -------------------- "I'm not crazy!" "Well, whatever. Maybe you just ate something really questionable, or perhaps someone hit you on the head with something large, blunt and heavy just now. By the way..." Gil nudged Grul pointedly. Ooh! Homepage - Blog - Geneforge, +2, +3 - My Elfwood Gallery and DevArt page So many strange ones around. Don't you think? Posts: 1308 | Registered: Sunday, September 8 2002 07:00 |
Law Bringer
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written Tuesday, September 19 2006 18:34
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Alec, like TM and Djur, follows the "if you have nothing bad to say, don't say anything" rationale. There's a reason the Desperance Scenario Reviews rank their subjects on a negative scale - 0 is the best. So yes, if your writing is good (which yours is), silence is the best you can hope for. -------------------- Encyclopaedia Ermariana • Forum Archives • Forum Statistics • RSS [Topic / Forum] My Blog • Polaris • I eat novels for breakfast. Polaris is dead, long live Polaris. Look on my works, ye mighty, and despair. Posts: 8752 | Registered: Wednesday, May 14 2003 07:00 |
Cartographer
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written Tuesday, September 19 2006 18:46
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Unfortunately I have to fill the silence with my own opinions, and I'm excessively cruel to myself. That's okay, though, I'll live... Now go read this. -------------------- "I'm not crazy!" "Well, whatever. Maybe you just ate something really questionable, or perhaps someone hit you on the head with something large, blunt and heavy just now. By the way..." Gil nudged Grul pointedly. Ooh! Homepage - Blog - Geneforge, +2, +3 - My Elfwood Gallery and DevArt page So many strange ones around. Don't you think? Posts: 1308 | Registered: Sunday, September 8 2002 07:00 |
Law Bringer
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written Tuesday, September 19 2006 19:23
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I read your first two chapters, Riibu. You are right that the second is better, but that's mostly because you are spending most of the first establishing a world. The Robert Jordan type beginning could be dropped and a little more action in the beginning could help. You might try reading a decent book on script writing since some of them explain how to give information from dialog and setting description so you can avoid exposition. Posts: 4643 | Registered: Friday, February 10 2006 08:00 |
Electric Sheep One
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written Tuesday, September 19 2006 21:00
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There is nothing wrong with rhyme or meter. For the writer they enforce some discipline and make a challenging puzzle. For the reader, they're just cool. And the first and only necessary duty of poetry is to sound cool. Of course, poems that scan awkwardly and are full of dearly bought rhymes are bad. The problem is not the form, but the badness. Poems that are scarcely parsable, but fit some strict form, are also bad as art. As an alternative to Sudoku for the writer, they're fine, and probably instructive. One way to get better at writing poetry is to practice fumbling through the language. Neither is sounding like anything else particularly a problem. Plenty of great poets, with famously distinctive voices, have some poems that sound a bit like other people. Another good Milton sonnet would be great, no matter who wrote it. And a lot of the worst poetry I've ever read could claim novelty. So I would be pleased as punch to have written a poem that sounded like Eliot with a head injury. To me that would be cool. But I'm fairly familiar with Eliot (except for his unpublished pornographic epic, which I've never seen) and I really don't see the connection. Care to cite any bits of Eliot that you think my poem sounds like, Alec? -------------------- We're not doing cool. We're doing pretty. Posts: 3335 | Registered: Thursday, September 4 2003 07:00 |
Electric Sheep One
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written Tuesday, September 19 2006 21:04
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quote:Yeah, on this I actually agree with Alec. Saying that Elijah's piece was my favorite was a bit faint; to me this one is in a different league from all the rest of our stuff here. -------------------- We're not doing cool. We're doing pretty. Posts: 3335 | Registered: Thursday, September 4 2003 07:00 |
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written Tuesday, September 19 2006 21:14
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quote:This is awesome. :) -------------------- SupaNik: Aran, you're not big enough to threaten Ash. Dammit, even JV had to think twice. Posts: 1861 | Registered: Friday, February 11 2005 08:00 |
Shaper
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written Wednesday, September 20 2006 04:14
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More poetry, since you all love it so much... :P It has dreams above its station Whores hide behind its blinds. I pity all that live here, Like they pity Im around. Far across the marshes, well, The swamps they call the streets, We walk a little, you take a leak Then we slope behind the gym. In the shadow of the hall I stop and seize your arm. Were going to defile this sacred place, Well blaspheme against the stone. A cigarette or two later, As were walking through the dark You give me your phone number And invite me to your room. -------------------- And when you want to Live How do you start? Where do you go? Who do you need to know? *Name by Slarty, so blame him if it's filthy... Posts: 2864 | Registered: Monday, September 8 2003 07:00 |
Lifecrafter
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written Wednesday, September 20 2006 10:01
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quote: [ Wednesday, September 20, 2006 10:02: Message edited by: The Worst Man Ever ] Posts: 794 | Registered: Tuesday, October 11 2005 07:00 |
Guardian
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written Wednesday, September 20 2006 11:20
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A day late, but here it is: -------------------- #!/usr/bin/perl $DeadMans{Chest}+=(15*$Man); $YoHoHo and $a, $bottle->{rum}; $Drink and $the_Devil; $had_done for ($the_rest); $YoHoHo and $a, $bottle->{rum}; # Really, you people are so boring # writing poems in a natural language. Posts: 1509 | Registered: Tuesday, January 10 2006 08:00 |
Apprentice
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written Wednesday, September 20 2006 22:40
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Showing a Sample. Oekaki [100% Mouse, I hate mouse] Charcoal Pencil Pencil and Ink Spriting [A Partial, uncolored one.] Two or Three Paragraphs from a story I've been writing. quote:Rest of the story... so far... I've also been known to do ****ty poetry and write lyrics from time to time. [ Friday, September 22, 2006 21:10: Message edited by: Ezrah, Kitty of Wonder. ] -------------------- HIHI!!!! *hugs indescriminantly* take that, FEEL THE LOVE!!!! Posts: 47 | Registered: Wednesday, September 3 2003 07:00 |
Warrior
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written Thursday, September 21 2006 06:42
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Pirate entertainment ahoy! Now I will give you a report. Pirates Vs. Ninjas: Who would win in a fight to the death betweeen a squad of ninjas, and a squad of pirates? Team Ninja: Members (Note that these are names assigned by the Ninja Badass/Stupid Name Commitee)- Shade- Team leader. Expert in poisons. Stryker- Second-in-command. Expert in throwing weapons. Reaper- Expert in stealth and speed. Grim- Expert in hand-to-hand combat. Weapons- Shade- Ten throwing stars. 5 kunai. Ten poison darts w/blowgun (poison is lethal after five minutes. Must hit bloodstream.). Stryker- Twenty kunai. Thirty throwing stars. Two windmill shuriken (big throwing stars). Reaper- Ten smoke bombs. Ten throwing stars. Twenty kunai. Grim- Spiked gauntlets. Ten throwing stars. Five kunai. Dress- They all wear the standerd black ninja outfit. Strategy- They prefer Reaper closing in on the enemy, using a smoke bomb, pelting the cloud with ranged weapons, then charging in and finishing whoever's left. Team Pirate: Members- Captain Blackbeard- Team leader. Expert with flintlock weapons. Captain Davy Jones- Second-in-command. Expert with cutlass. Captain Ahab- Expert with harpoons. Captain Arrr- Expert with belaying pin. Weapons- Captain Blackbeard- Four flintlock pistols w/two reloads for each pistol. One flintlock rifle w/two reloads. Cutlass and belaying pin. Captain Davy Jones- Twin cutlass. Two flintlock pistols w/two reloads each. Belaying pin. Captain Ahab- Five harpoons. Two flintlock pistols w/two reloads each. Belaying pin and cutlass. Captain Arrr- Two belaying pins. Cutlass. Two flintlock pistols w/two reloads each. Dress- Mostly standerd pirate uniform-black hat with skull and crossbones, peg leg (does not affect movement), and red uniform. Blackbeard, however, sets his beard on fire. Strategy- Fire off as many shots as they can before enemy closes. Then, Arrr and Jones rush enemy while Blackbeard and Ahab provide cover. Battle: To be continues... -------------------- Polaris The most merciful thing in the world, I think, is the inability of the human mind to correlate all its contents. We live on a placid island of ignorance in the midst of black seas of infinity, and it was not meant that we should voyage far. - H.P. Lovecraft Posts: 164 | Registered: Wednesday, June 14 2006 07:00 |
Lifecrafter
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written Thursday, September 21 2006 07:20
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Warrior
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written Friday, September 22 2006 14:03
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Here's a sonnet I wrote a while ago. As you can see, without many topics in mind, it became rather self referential: Explain the importance of rhyming verse, Iambs or trochees with which to conform. Are sonnets such that you mean to coerce My tortured spirit to compose the norm? Is lexical choice so paramount that The writer is a slave to convention, Producing poetry as drab and flat, As to be beyond all comprehension? What turn is this? Alas, I am betrayed! My traitorous words are arranged in rhyme, And all that I claim in this mad tirade, Is hypocrisy and a waste of time. I must end before I further digress, With a tiresome rhyming couplet, no less. -------------------- "Build a man a fire, and he´ll be warm for a day; set a man on fire, and he´ll be warm for the rest of his life." Posts: 65 | Registered: Thursday, March 2 2006 08:00 |
Warrior
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written Sunday, September 24 2006 12:50
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Visual art is pretty much the only kind I've done for years, and I don't have much of it that's both uploaded and current right now, but I'll link what I'm working on. This post will probably be edited with new links when stuff is complete. Generally, completed stuff goes in my deviantART account and incomplete stuff goes on Photobucket, which is quicker to upload to. Link 1! It's Aeris! From VG Cats! And it's almost done! Link 2! And this is Soma Cruz and the Chronomage! Soma's in his Aria of Sorrow outfit here. I'm told there are some big problems with the perspective, though, so it probably needs some major revisions. And as for everyone else's stuff...I'll get to it! Although I have no idea what to say about poetry. [ Sunday, September 24, 2006 12:53: Message edited by: Whyte Shadow ] Posts: 147 | Registered: Sunday, June 13 2004 07:00 |
Lifecrafter
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written Sunday, September 24 2006 20:34
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きょう、おれは シボレーがいる -- あきのチン。 [ Sunday, September 24, 2006 20:35: Message edited by: The Worst Man Ever ] Posts: 794 | Registered: Tuesday, October 11 2005 07:00 |
Lifecrafter
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written Sunday, September 24 2006 21:01
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How about music? This is the First Draft. Not sure what I'm calling it yet. I wrote this one based on the surface in Exile 3. -------------------- The Silent Assassin believes himself to be an artist. Or at least, that was the response he gave when questioned about the disappearance of our neighbor's propane grill. -------------------- -Lenar Labs What's Your Destiny? Ushmushmeifa: Lenar's power is almighty and ineffable. All hail lord Noric, god of... well, something important, I'm sure. Posts: 735 | Registered: Monday, January 16 2006 08:00 |
Law Bringer
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written Monday, September 25 2006 19:57
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Hm... since this thread seems to have persisted quite nicely (read: I finally discovered it, and need to read everything again before commenting), I'll contribute. I've got two bits of writing here. The first is a story that I'm rather proud of, and I might go ahead and upload another that I had to write for the same class (come to think of it, I've got like two or three more). The second one... well, it was also for that class, but it was an odd assignment. In the end, it turned out like a piece of Spidweb fanfanfic, back before Aran became a mod (shocking that such a time ever existed). Bash away. :D -------------------- Gamble with Gaea, and she eats your dice. I hate undead. I really, really, really, really hate undead. With a passion. Posts: 4130 | Registered: Friday, March 26 2004 08:00 |
Shaper
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written Monday, September 25 2006 23:04
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Eh, I'll drop my inane xmas Ode to A4 offering from last season. At least it's on topic. My favorite poetry is quite silly. Shel Silverstein, I bow before thee. -S- THE NIGHT BEFORE CHRISTMAS IN EXILE (Mommy, what’s “night?”) ‘Twas the night before Christmas, and all through the green-glowing, fungus-infested house Not a creature was stirring, except for a mouse (a giant-sized, irritated, pustulent one at that); Empty scabbards were hung by the chimney with care In hopes that Radiant Blades soon would be there; Four adventurers were nestled all snug in their Geyser Inn beds, While visions of Action Point-granting body-armor danced in their heads; And my priest in her Magi Robe, and I in my Thought Cap, Had just settled down for a brief Adventurer's power-nap, When out on the stalagmites (or is it stalactites—I can never remember which) there arose such a clatter, I sprang from the (compressed mushroom meal) bed to see what was the matter. Away to the (carbonized mushroom meal) window I flew like a flash, Tore open the shutters and threw up the (mayor’s) sash. (Eww, gross!) The green mushroom moonlight on the breast of the new-fallen foe (He really shouldn’t have insulted my Clover Boots like that) Gave the lustre of mid-night to the bat droppings below, When, what to my (slightly bloodshot from too much mushroom ale) eyes should appear, But an oversized Geneforge boat, and eight giant domesticated lizards (full of mushroom-meal beer), With a little old driver, so demented and sick, I knew in a moment it must be Dead Patrick. More rapid than Frenzied Chitrachs his coursers they came, And he whistled, and shouted, and called them by name; "Now, Crusher! now, Duncer! now, Lancer and Pigpen! On, Vomit! on Stupid! on, Blunder and Blitzed-Again! To the top of the elevationless cave! to the top of the secretless wall! Now dash away! dash away! dash away all!" As dry leaves (leaves, what are those?) that before dragon breath fly, When they meet with an obstacle (like my Jade Halberd), mount to the sky, So up to the house-top the lizards they flew (I guess they’re drakes), With the Geneforged boat full of Diamond Spray wands, and Dead Patrick too. And then, in a twinkling, I heard on the garbage pile My mates lancing and skewering each pesky reptile. As I drew my (12-33) Oozing Blade in my hand, and was turning around, Down the chimney Dead Patrick came like a frog, er—hellhound. He was dressed all in Poor Fur, from his head to his foot, And his clothes were all tarnished with mushroom-hued soot; A bundle of potions he had flung on his back, And he looked like a Slightly Expensive™ peddler just opening his pack. His eyes -- how they squinted! his dimples how muddy! His cheeks were like Graymold, his nose a bit ruddy (more mushroom ale) His droll little mouth was drawn up like an Ebony Bow, And the beard of his chin was as white as bat guano; The stump of a mushroom he held tight in both teeth, And the smoke encircled his head like an Icy Rain wreath; He had a broadsword smile and a little round belly (rare ‘round here), That shook, when he laughed like a bowlful of Gaseous Goo jelly. He was listless and pale, a right sorry old Avernite, And I laughed when I saw him, this wraith in the night; The sink of his eye and the list of his head, Soon gave me to know soon again he’d be dead; He spoke not a word, but went straight to his task, And filled all the stockings with a Knowledge Brew flask, And laying his finger full into his nose, And giving a flick, up the chimney he rose; He sprang to his Geneforge boat, to his team gave a whistle, But they no longer harkened, as we’d carved them to gristle. But I heard him exclaim, ‘ere he stumbled out of sight, "Curse you Adventurers, and to all a good blight." [ Monday, September 25, 2006 23:06: Message edited by: Synergy ] -------------------- A4 Item Locations A4 Singleton G4 Items List G4 Forging List The Insidious Infiltrator Posts: 2009 | Registered: Monday, September 12 2005 07:00 |
Shaper
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written Tuesday, September 26 2006 05:28
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Nice work, Synergy! Do you suppose they sing that around a giant christmas fungus in Formello? -------------------- I tried to think of something witty to put here. Needless to say, I failed. Posts: 2686 | Registered: Friday, September 8 2006 07:00 |
Guardian
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written Tuesday, September 26 2006 08:30
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I'd submit that to JV, Syn. It deserves a place next to the Ode to Avernum. -------------------- But the true test of the body, Heart, spirit and mind, Did not come from courage, Nor slaying my own kind. No, the thing I will remember, When I'm dead and all moldy, Is that I met the friendly spiders, And kept my sanity! - Ode to Avernum Posts: 1509 | Registered: Tuesday, January 10 2006 08:00 |
Councilor
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written Tuesday, September 26 2006 09:54
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Originally by Ephesos: quote:The only complaint that I have is that I've read them both before and I was hoping for something new. :P But Dikiyoba can't complain too loudly, because Dikiyoba doesn't have anything new to contribute either. Two fanfic scripts and a drawing of a slime beast is currently the limit of Dikiyoba's artistic talent. Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00 |