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maybe you could, instead of just saying what is wrong, also say how it can be improved.

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You asked what made it look amateurish, and I told you.

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Originally written by Slartucker:

On Nephilian: I'm glad you are pursuing the language! I have a few comments.
1) Pronounciation: Your "FH" doesn't make sense. "TH" is a single sound, not two sounds, so replacing the T with the F as you suggest would essentially lead one to make a normal "F" sound -- but you differentiate those.
2) I like your use of animate/inanimate gender, which seems very appropriate to nephil shamanism.
3) The cases are a little confusing. You explain what they mean, but for some it's unclear how they are used. I guess you are making the language ergative-absolutive?

Out of curiosity, what *is* your first language?

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Originally written by Thralni, Nephil translators & co.:


Clemens, I didn't know your mother tongue is Dutch! Care to tell me where you come from (which province, obiously)?

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Originally written by Thralni, Nephil translators & co.:

I'll look after the link later, if you don't mind. I have a more urgent problem at the moment. How the hell do I get an image to work! I use adobe pagemill. I put in the image, upload both the page and the image, and then either image doesn't appear at all, or there is a "torn image" icon on the place the image should be. It is really important for the image to work. This is the code:

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Originally written by Thralni, Nephil translators & co.:

Ef: the program seems to put that link there, becasue when I look at the "properties" of that image, I see the correct link. When I alter this in the code, the image still can't be found and I get that "torn image" icon.

Aran: i don't think I really understand what you said. Do you mean I should make a seperate wiki?

To all of you: What do you guys prefer: I pop-up which one can just click away, or just leave open, but hide behind the main browser winow, or have ads at the top or bottom of the page?

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