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Master
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What I have to say: It works.

I'm no graphics artist, but I think you need to work on the face shape in general. It just looks too...unhumanly. Also, are you going to use shading when you color it?

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I called it amateur simply because some of my friends who are into that style can draw better than some professional work I've seen. ie. they're pretty damn good.

Compared to the average person's attempt, say mine, your's is pretty good.

If it looks odd, then perhaps it might have been wiser to have drawn it with a slight angle on it, instead of just being a side on view. Done right, that sort of thing can give a fairly reasonable 3D effect.

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Cool drawing.

(somewhat related question: Why are Playboy bunnies "bunnies" why not another animal?

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(somewhat related question: Why are Playboy bunnies "bunnies" why not another animal?
B/C BUNEIS R TEH SEXY!11!1!

I dont like drawing anime art, all of it is very cheap, except for those one time animes like Cowboy Bebop. It's a decent drawing, even without the shading, and she does look a lot like Kagome.
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http://whyteshadow.newgaea-nxs.com/gallery/tempo-michiko-color8.jpg

Semi-final version. Prepare to be thrilled by color, shading, and mouths that aren't flesh-colored!

Actually, I'm looking for a bit of feedback on Michiko's face since my usual feedback sources seem to be missing at the moment. Other stuff is good too, though. =^.^=

[ Saturday, August 14, 2004 20:35: Message edited by: Whyte Shadow ]

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I think it looks great, Whyte. Really good work.

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Most of it clicks fairly well, but holy HELL- Tempo's eye stands out way too much. Plus, I'd color the "inside" of the rabbit ears pinkish.
Everything else clicks, I think. Although I still think the legs look weird.

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The eyes... they're stylistic, what can I say.

Also, that's pretty amazing. Great work.

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Very nice indeed, WS. The first thing that drew my attention was the eye. I love her hair.
My first impression of his leg was funky. Almost as if he were standing on one leg only. But that was the first impression, then I got used to it pretty fast.

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Great work whyte, but tempos eye need another colour, or no colour and the rabbit ears need some pink inside. Otherwise, its really great work.

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I'm glad people are being polite to Whyte. Keep it up. *fondles the Yaoi Gun*

I think Tempo's leg gives a sort of comic effect -- that he's leaning way back out of surprise. I can't really explain it, but I like it.

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I like. The eye does look a little odd, the ears do need colour, and his stance does look a little odd, but other than that it's good. Be proud.

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Thanks for being so polite, everyone. =^.^= Color is new territory for me, and I appreciate all the support and feedback you've given.

As for the issues you brought up...

About the eye, I'm not quite sure what you mean by it standing out too much or needing another color - I like it the way it is - but I'll experiment a bit anyway.

The ears really do look good with some color inside, too. I wonder why I didn't think of that myself... =^.^=;

And as for his leg...Djur pretty much said it. By the way, do those guns come in other flavors? =^.^=

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I think there's a shoujo-ai gun, somewhere, in theory.

However, if it still exists, Feran has been hogging it for years, so the yaoi gun will have to do.

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Yup, I think you should make the eye a little smaller, give the boy the appearance of having two legs even though he is nearly sideways, and polish up the face shape (again, I still would prefer a more conventional face shape, but then again, if you consider that the "signature" feature of this work, I shouldn't be complaining.) Oh yeah, and give the bunny ears some color. It looks imcomplete and that you gave no attention to coloring the ears. Brown and pink, maybe?

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