Critique
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Infiltrator
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written Saturday, August 21 2004 20:24
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Please critique. I've trying to create a low height lamp for my town (see picture). Would you change the colors, style, detail (quite hard to do actually), or perhaps the design.  -------------------- My ego is bigger than yours. Posts: 480 | Registered: Thursday, October 11 2001 07:00 |
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Agent
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written Saturday, August 21 2004 20:28
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They look pretty pleasing to the eye, actually. The only thing is that the southern side of the lamps look a little too dark considering that the lamps emit light from every direction. Since the sun shines from the other direction, a little shading would be appropriate, but not that much. -------------------- Thuryl: I mean, most of us don't go around consuming our own bodily fluids, no matter how delicious they are. ==== Alorael: War and violence would end if we all had each other's babies! ==== Drakefyre: Those are hideous mangos. Posts: 1415 | Registered: Thursday, March 27 2003 08:00 |
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Shock Trooper
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written Saturday, August 21 2004 20:30
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It looks quite good actually. Possibly you could have the lamp on a more pedestal type feature. But it looks good as is if you ask me. [ Saturday, August 21, 2004 20:31: Message edited by: Mortimer ] -------------------- Fine Meal is people!!! Posts: 289 | Registered: Saturday, February 16 2002 08:00 |
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Apprentice
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written Saturday, August 21 2004 21:13
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Nicely done Dahak, but I have to agree with garrison. Can I have one for my front porch?? -------------------- [i]YUni[/i] Posts: 14 | Registered: Monday, September 30 2002 07:00 |
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BANNED
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written Saturday, August 21 2004 21:22
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Wow. You really are a whiz with terraining. -------------------- * Posts: 6936 | Registered: Tuesday, September 18 2001 07:00 |
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The Establishment
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written Saturday, August 21 2004 22:13
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Very nice. Would you be so kind to donate that graphic to the Louve and the graphics competition? -------------------- Your flower power is no match for my glower power! Posts: 3726 | Registered: Tuesday, September 18 2001 07:00 |
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Infiltrator
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written Saturday, August 21 2004 22:43
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quote:Thanks. I like architectural design. quote:That is what this critique was for. I wanted to see how good people felt. It doesn't look so hot in the daylight though, so I'm going to create an unlit version to be replaced by it in the daylight. -------------------- My ego is bigger than yours. Posts: 480 | Registered: Thursday, October 11 2001 07:00 |
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Infiltrator
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written Sunday, August 22 2004 09:29
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Just an idea: If you feel up to it, you could have an NPC who goes around lighting all the lamps at nightfall! It would probably be hard to implement, but if you pulled it off it would really add a lot of realism. -------------------- 5.0.1.0.0.0.0.1.0... Posts: 508 | Registered: Thursday, May 29 2003 07:00 |
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Infiltrator
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written Sunday, August 22 2004 10:27
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I'd prefer using magic... -------------------- My ego is bigger than yours. Posts: 480 | Registered: Thursday, October 11 2001 07:00 |
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Infiltrator
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written Sunday, August 22 2004 10:54
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It looks good. :) quote:And how would you make it, so that it lits automaticaly when it's night? -------------------- Visit the Blades of Avernum Center and the Beta Testing Center -------------- "Beware lest anyone cheat you through philosophy and empty deceit, according to the tradition of men, according to the basic principles of the world, and not according to Christ." Colossians 2:6-9 Posts: 483 | Registered: Tuesday, June 29 2004 07:00 |
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Infiltrator
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written Sunday, August 22 2004 12:36
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It will be part of a script. Just switch the terrains... Daylight  Morning Garden  [ Sunday, August 22, 2004 13:33: Message edited by: Dahak ] -------------------- My ego is bigger than yours. Posts: 480 | Registered: Thursday, October 11 2001 07:00 |
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written Sunday, August 22 2004 21:13
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The "windows" on the unlit ones should probably be quite a bit darker; they look like solid stone at the moment. Apart from that, you've done some fine work with this. -------------------- The Empire Always Loses: This Time For Sure! Posts: 9973 | Registered: Saturday, March 30 2002 08:00 |