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Lifecrafter
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written Monday, April 3 2006 09:59
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Page 21!!!!!! W00T!!!!!!!!! EDIT: Post 300!!!!! W00T AGAIN!!! [ Monday, April 03, 2006 10:01: Message edited by: Infernal666hate ] -------------------- ??? ?????? ???? ????? Posts: 883 | Registered: Wednesday, October 19 2005 07:00 |
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Veteran*
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written Monday, April 3 2006 12:00
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You forgot 500th reply... Posts: 455 | Registered: Tuesday, May 17 2005 07:00 |
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Nuke and Pave
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written Monday, April 3 2006 14:01
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quote:A fitting conclusion. The fact that we knew that everybody would die removed most of suspense from final battle, but that was probably unavoidable. Overall, it was a pretty fun, and at times very funny, script. quote:You meant something like this? A dark figure walks through the piles of bodies littering General forum. In his hands is a small potion of what looks like liquid light. Dintiradan: It’s good that I had a clone of myself made before these problems started. And I even have some Balm of Life to get my Legion of Terror started again. A good Evil Overlord always comes back. MUAHAHAHA Seeing the body of Zephyr Tempest, Dintiradan bends down. Dintiradan: A mage... He would probably make a good underling. Let’s see how this works. Dintiradan pours some Balm of Life onto Zephyr Tempest’s well-preserved body and the entire body begins to glow with the same light as the bottle. Soon the body begins to move, opens its eyes and gets up. Zephyr Tempest: What happened? Where is the Ur-Noob? Why is everybody dead? Dintiradan: It doesn’t matter. The main thing is that you are the first member of my new Legion of Terror. Dintiradan2: You mean MY new legion of terror. Dintiradan: Who are you? Another clone? How many more are out there? Dintiradan2: You don’t have to worry about others. I’ve destroyed the cloning machinery and now I just have to get rid of you to remain the only Evil Overlord in the world. Dintiradan2 fires Ultimate Weapon of Doom at Dintiradan, instantly evaporating him. The bottle with Balm of Life falls to the ground and shatters, with its contents disappearing in a flash of light the moment magical container is broken. Zephyr Tempest: Balm of Life! You’ve destroyed it! I will never let your evil take over the world. Zephyr Tempest casts an Ice Bolt, hitting Ultimate Weapon of Doom. Resulting explosion kills both Dintiradan2 and Zephyr Tempest himself. -------------------- Be careful with a word, as you would with a sword, For it too has the power to kill. However well placed word, unlike a well placed sword, Can also have the power to heal. Posts: 2649 | Registered: Wednesday, October 3 2001 07:00 |
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Master
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written Monday, April 3 2006 16:56
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quote:Someone got canned for doing that. Only he did it twice, I guess... -------------------- -ben4808 Posts: 3360 | Registered: Friday, June 25 2004 07:00 |
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Councilor
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written Monday, April 3 2006 17:16
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In no particular order (except for the final paragraph): ----- Originally by Ephesos: quote:No! Bad Ephesos! Don't even think about it! ----- I made a few final updates to the story. The appearances page has been cleaned up, Aran has earned a different review, the blatant ad photo has been updated, Spy-there's gender has been corrected, and I've added a links page. The links page is mainly for me and isn't finished yet. ----- There may be a few useful (or many or none) comments left, but I think this topic has fulfilled its purpose. Please allow it to retire peacefully without throwing spam at it. ----- I've cleared my signature, so here is the link to the script. It can also be found in my profile. SpiderWeb: Attack of the Noobs If anyone does have any suggestions, I am open to minor changes (say, getting a better dying line or fixing a typo). ----- Originally by Archmage Alex: quote:Dikiyoba is holding you to that this time. Dikiyoba has no idea how, but Dikiyoba will think of something if it proves necessary. Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00 |
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Guardian
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written Monday, April 3 2006 21:18
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quote:Ahhhhhh, much better! I died in an explosion I caused myself! Huzzah! Although, that comment made me sound insane. [ Monday, April 03, 2006 21:20: Message edited by: Zephyr Tempest. ] -------------------- -Zephyr Tempest, your personal entertainer Posts: 1779 | Registered: Monday, December 9 2002 08:00 |
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Guardian
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written Tuesday, April 4 2006 04:43
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Yes, something like that. Though usually the conflict is made to last from one and a half to two hours. -------------------- IF I EVER BECOME AN EVIL OVERLORD: I will never build a sentient computer smarter than I am. Posts: 1509 | Registered: Tuesday, January 10 2006 08:00 |
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Shaper
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written Tuesday, April 4 2006 07:31
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I'd just like to applaud Dikiyobiaria for a truly amazing script. I could spew exposition at you, and heck, you might even like it, but I'll refrain from doing so. Anyways, congratulations on getting me to focus my attention on an internet-thingy(tm) for more than a few days. Word out. -------------------- And when you want to Live How do you start? Where do you go? Who do you need to know? *Name by Slarty, so blame him if it's filthy... Posts: 2864 | Registered: Monday, September 8 2003 07:00 |
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Law Bringer
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written Tuesday, April 4 2006 08:04
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quote:I'm a little confused as to what this would look like... but I imagine that it would be very unpleasant. -------------------- Gamble with Gaea, and she eats your dice. I hate undead. I really, really, really, really hate undead. With a passion. Posts: 4130 | Registered: Friday, March 26 2004 08:00 |
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Agent
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written Tuesday, April 4 2006 10:57
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Very nice Dikyoba. Amazing read. Pity I had to die, but hey, I survived for a LONG time compared to everyone else. Just one thing: You've ogt my name spelt wrong in Act 8 or 9. It's no biggie, but thought I'd mention it anyway. There's no "h" in my name. So yeah: "Can't wait to see your next script" - Archmagus Micael [ Tuesday, April 04, 2006 11:01: Message edited by: Archmagus Micael ] -------------------- "You dare Trifle with Avernum?" ~ Erika the Archmage -------------------- My Scenarios: Undead Valley : A small Undead problem, what could possibly go wrong? -------------------- Richard Black - PROOF of his existance (the Infernal one's website). -------------------- MY FORUM! Randomosity at it's highest! :) Posts: 1370 | Registered: Thursday, June 10 2004 07:00 |
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Councilor
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written Tuesday, April 4 2006 13:42
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Originally by Archmagus Micael: quote:Sorry about that. I think the mispelling was in Act 7 and I think I've fixed it now. Originally by Nikki: quote:What inspired this name, and why? Dikiyoba can't put it on the list of acceptable name variations until Dikiyoba has an explanation for it. Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00 |
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Raven v. Writing Desk
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written Tuesday, April 4 2006 14:19
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quote:You know, I'm tempted to start my own, democratic list of Dikiyoba name variations, including names without explanations ;) -------------------- Slarty vs. Desk • Desk vs. Slarty • Timeline of Ermarian • G4 Strategy Central Posts: 3560 | Registered: Wednesday, November 7 2001 08:00 |
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Shaper
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written Wednesday, April 5 2006 00:31
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quote:I dunno. I don't ever plan for things like this. But I CAN make something up... Dikiyobiaria came about because a) I wanted it to. b) It sounds funny. c) I was bored, and couldn't find any pictures of a kitten plowing bowls. Hope that's satisfactory. -------------------- And when you want to Live How do you start? Where do you go? Who do you need to know? *Name by Slarty, so blame him if it's filthy... Posts: 2864 | Registered: Monday, September 8 2003 07:00 |
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Raven v. Writing Desk
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written Wednesday, April 5 2006 05:35
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"Indeed, sir, if your metaphor stink, I will stop my nose; or against any man's metaphor. Prithee, get thee further." -- Shakespeare -------------------- Slarty vs. Desk • Desk vs. Slarty • Timeline of Ermarian • G4 Strategy Central Posts: 3560 | Registered: Wednesday, November 7 2001 08:00 |
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Councilor
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written Wednesday, April 5 2006 17:21
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Originally by Nikki: quote:Dikiyoba will say that it's good enough. It does sound funny... Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00 |
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Shaper
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written Thursday, April 6 2006 01:17
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Well done, Dikijklmnopqrstuvwxyz. I liked the ending. [ Thursday, April 06, 2006 01:18: Message edited by: Spring ] -------------------- I'll put a Spring in your step. :ph34r: Posts: 2396 | Registered: Saturday, January 29 2005 08:00 |
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Agent
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written Thursday, April 6 2006 15:05
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:D aww! I knew that poison would do it. Though I rather had the idea to saturate the Spiderwebbers' skin with poison ... On the other hand I was completely wrong when I expected JV's appearance <_< You deserve an Oscar for the best scenario, Dikiyoba. And, um ... it's Averforge, not Avernumforge. ....,=, ....*.* ....I.I .vvvvvvv .!!best!! ..script ...vvvv ...yyyy ...yyy ....yy ....yy ....yy ....vv ...=.= ddddd......yy.....yy...oooo....bbbbb.......aaa dd...dd.....yy...yy..oo....oo...bb...bb....aa.aa dd....dd.=..yy.yy...oo....oo...bbbbb....aa...aa dd...dd........yy.....oo....oo...bb...bb..aaaaaaa ddddd.........yy.......oooo.....bbbbb...aa......aa -------------------- Slartucker: * facepalm facepalm facepalm * Dikiyoba: Are you unconscious yet? Posts: 1420 | Registered: Wednesday, October 2 2002 07:00 |
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Master
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written Thursday, April 6 2006 17:23
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Wow. That's pretty cool. -------------------- -ben4808 Posts: 3360 | Registered: Friday, June 25 2004 07:00 |
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Councilor
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written Saturday, April 22 2006 15:35
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Well, here we go again. I'm bringing this topic out of retirement. Curse these inevitable sequels! Edit: Official Episode 2 thread moved to here. [ Saturday, April 22, 2006 16:00: Message edited by: Dikiyoba ] Posts: 4346 | Registered: Friday, December 23 2005 08:00 |
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Law Bringer
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written Saturday, April 22 2006 17:59
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How many times am I going to die? :P -------------------- "You're drinking liquor because you're thirsty? How nasty is your freaking water?" —Lazarus Spiderweb Chat Room Avernum RP • Summaries • OoC • Roster Shadow Vale - My site, home of the Spiderweb Chat Database, BoA Scenario Database, & the A1 Quest List, among other things. Posts: 1556 | Registered: Sunday, November 20 2005 08:00 |